I feel similar to this oneshot as I do to Haruhana Aya's serialization A Kiss for the Girl's Scars. Both this oneshot and that manga have some plot, pacing, and character issues, but the author puts a ton of heart, passion, and sincerity into each that make them compelling anyway. I honestly have a lot of optimism in Haruhana's potential, I think if she can gain experience as a writer while holding onto her clear love for the genre and the characters she writes, she might be able to create a true masterpiece someday.