I don't know. This felt like a very long chapter for very little, and that entire cliche "school celebrity" thing is a bit ... meh, even when dressed up in fantastical elements.

I do like the eye thing though. They are just occasionally fire, don't worry about it, perfectly normal eye things. (:

Quite a nice continuation, although I remain cautious about Amakake.

Head of the class? Queue the music.

It’s very clear the author has this huge detailed world in their head that they wanna share, but they’re kinda not good at presenting it as a story. A little too much telling, not a whole lot of showing. No shade on that, I’m in pretty much the same position with my own shit, but there’s definitely room for improvement there.

Worldbuilding was created so gay people could engineer their own universes with physics and cultures that allow for otherwise-unimaginable exercises of homosexuality, and so this is the grandest application of the fantasy genre. Thank you for coming to my TED talk.

Temp, you are a gift to this website. Please never change.

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oh my god it's happening LETS GO LESBIANS LETS GO ARE YOU READY TENGU LAND?!!

The first chapter was kind of hard to follow but the second is much easier. Re-reading the first chapter after reading the 2nd helped a lot.

I am gonna save this til the end of the volume and binge it. It looks interesting.

Worldbuilding was created so gay people could engineer their own universes with physics and cultures that allow for otherwise-unimaginable exercises of homosexuality, and so this is the grandest application of the fantasy genre. Thank you for coming to my TED talk.

I concur!

and that's it, a fun little story although I certainly would have loved to see more, but then again this seems to have been this author's first original work and I was entranced.

I really liked this and will be looking forward to seeing more from this author with their other works.

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This feels incredibly disjointed somehow. I feel like there's so much in-betweens that were left out for whatever reason and that just made this whole thing more confusing than it should have been. I'd definitely love to read more of this if hiven the opportunity tho

If there was more time and pages, I think it'd feel more cohesive, and probably more "yuri," but I liked the worldbuilding a lot and if any more appears I'll definitely be supporting the artist. It was cute! And cool!

This feels incredibly disjointed somehow. I feel like there's so much in-betweens that were left out for whatever reason and that just made this whole thing more confusing than it should have been. I'd definitely love to read more of this if hiven the opportunity tho

It's just the problem with doujinshi saga stories. The giant world and characters is simply not something a person can maintain without doing it full-time as a job (and as we know full-time mangaka have crazy work schedules). It's ambitious but sadly these always end the same: either an abrupt ending when the author runs out of gas and sees they barely made progress or the story stretches tens of doujinshi over years and the story just becomes very unfocused and lost.

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the lesbians are alive, happy and together at the end I'M SO HAPPY FOR THEM (❤´艸｀❤)

The end? They just got off the starting blocks...

Very short but very sweet. I liked it.

when the good part just started...it ended....it was fun while it lasted i suppose. wish we had more of the flirting and spending time together...maybe a little more about them talking about their feelings and getting closer without a huge time skip. sigh, such is the doujinshi life

What do you mean the end? I want more!

Quite nice, although I do wish we could have learned more about the silver wings, at least whether she let her girlfriend know about them.

Extra: https://e-hentai.org/g/2327416/8f5a056275/

A little surprised the extra isn't about Shizuki with Kureha but with someone else but i'll take it

That's quite the extra...

Glad komera decided to keep it short and sweet instead of prolonging it and never finishing. Definitely a cool world and while it was somewhat disjointed, you could pretend we’re just seeing snippets of a larger narrative. Especially since this is supposed to be their ‘past’. The characters were fun too and I loved those fits lol

A little surprised the extra isn't about Shizuki with Kureha but with someone else but i'll take it

Same, I feel a bit torn

That ended quite simply,but now have chances for even more non-Touhou tengu fun times.

ah...Please continue!!!! I cannot have this manga enough! Extra is good too...

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