Do it, pussy

Better a pussy than a dick.

Won't be a dick if the other consents.

Ive been liking the art recently in these new chapters, it gives a bit more character to them. Also hype time she is now experiencing her feelings.

Kiss her you dummy!

I love this series to bits, I really do. But right now I feel like a whole story arc was missing. That day, at the beach, when the system made Yvonne cut Elsa, when she was forced to face the fact that she was a terrible danger to Elsa, she made a hard decision: cut all ties with Elsa, make her leave the house and never speak to her again. It was all for Elsa's own good. Yvonne was especially cruel that day, since she wanted Elsa to hate her... and when Elsa finally left, heartbroken and in tears, Yvonne was like "Good! Mission accomplished!"

But then next chapter Yvonne was desperately pining for Elsa. She wanted Elsa to forget everything, return to her and start living with her again. All her resolutions from the previous day were forgotten. And Elsa obliged as if nothing had happened. And now they are together again, as sappy and lovey-dovey as before, and here I am wondering what the eff was the purpose of that shitstorm of angst before. This is serious bad writing, as if the author was saying: OK readers you got to see the girls suffer for a while, you got to go "Aww poor bay-beez!" at them, that's enough dark pleasure for now, let's go back to the usual flirty shenanigans!

I want to believe it's a problem of the adaptation to comic. I hope the novel has much, much more development on the process (mostly the psychological side of things) that leads to the reconciliation of these two. I'll be really sad and disappointed otherwise.

I want to believe it's a problem of the adaptation to comic. I hope the novel has much, much more development on the process (mostly the psychological side of things) that leads to the reconciliation of these two. I'll be really sad and disappointed otherwise.

I see it a little differently than you do, there is a clear psychological shift in Yvonne over the course of the recent chapters.

She had always been negative about the system asking her to bully elsa, and hurting elsa was something she wanted to avoid.In order not to hurt Elsa Yvonne could even help her to fall in love with someone else (by introducing Garth to Elsa)

Yvonne was originally trying to use gentler means to get rid of Elsa, but she fell into trauma syndrome during the argument that day.The over-the-top things she said to Elsa were the result of her constant stress and anxiety transition, not something she had originally intended to do.So the next day she immediately regretted it, which I think is understandable.

Now she is beginning to understand her feelings gradually, and although she does not yet understand her feelings of love for Elsa, she fully understands that she is strongly possessive of Elsa (and wants to keep Elsa by her side)

For this reason she decides to rebel against the system (ch.37). These were decisions made after she understood that she would be at risk of punishment and she decided not to give up any possibilities, which was a good development for us.

The storyc arc doesn't missing, the next story arc I think has to do with the mysterious time traveller. She seems to have the ability to rewrite the system, and the previous 0 mark option may have come from her.I'm looking forward to what happens next

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Just Gal palz playing and getting wet together.

Evies down with the sickness

grossly screaming in falceto whale edition*intensifiessss.*O!!!!!kyaaahhhhh! This chapter is finesss. Like bruh I can feel the tension with that tugging hair on elsa's ear part.

JUST DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You better believe it.

Stop hesitating already girl~ you know you want it as well... You were so close and you just have to get cold feet...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

It’s happening! This is not a drill, I REPEAT, THIS IS NOT A DRILL

I love this series to bits, I really do. But right now I feel like a whole story arc was missing. That day, at the beach, when the system made Yvonne cut Elsa, when she was forced to face the fact that she was a terrible danger to Elsa, she made a hard decision: cut all ties with Elsa, make her leave the house and never speak to her again. It was all for Elsa's own good. Yvonne was especially cruel that day, since she wanted Elsa to hate her... and when Elsa finally left, heartbroken and in tears, Yvonne was like "Good! Mission accomplished!"

IIRC a previous note from the uploader around when they released that chapter said that the author has gone back and inserted content between early novel chapters, and then that stuff has gotten inserted into the comic where it went chronologically. That's probably why it doesn't have clean continuity and the plot thread is just sort of dropped, it was a late addition.

My guess is it was meant to emphasize the maliciousness of the villainness system since it can be easy to view it as mischievous if you forget the periodic bits where instead of telling Yvonne to bully her it tells Yvonne to maim or kill her.

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Just kiss already! UWU my gay heart.

She’s starting to believe, hell yeah

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IIRC a previous note from the uploader around when they released that chapter said that the author has gone back and inserted content between early novel chapters, and then that stuff has gotten inserted into the comic where it went chronologically. That's probably why it doesn't have clean continuity and the plot thread is just sort of dropped, it was a late addition.

I think you're right. If you read the comic up to the page right before Evie slashes Elsa, then jump over the following parts and start reading again at the start of chapter 35, you'll see a seamless flawless continuity. The in between those two points is where extra content was inserted, and the problem is that it doesn't mesh too well.

AAAAHHHH!!!!!
LITERALLY JUST FUCK ALREADY!!!!!!!!
AAAAHHHH!!!!!

Also Elsa's magic looks an awful lot like the mysterious cloaked person's magic in the previous chapter that changed the bully option.

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Congratulations! You win!

A free trip to gay!

LITERALLY JUST FUCK ALREADY!!!!!!!!

Please don't ever say this in public if you don't mind

Would you kindly make sure Rex never sees the light of day?

AAAAHHHH!!!!!
LITERALLY JUST FUCK ALREADY!!!!!!!!
AAAAHHHH!!!!!

Also Elsa's magic looks an awful lot like the mysterious cloaked person's magic in the previous chapter that changed the bully option.

lmao

Can I just say? Thank you guys for making the Tvtropes page I made for this the busiest page I've ever made on the site.

Anyway here are my theories:

I think the Villainess System is the creation of the Yvonne from the original otome game, offended by this... "pretender" that's wearing her face. That would explain the blackout Evie experienced at the end of the date.

As for the future Elsa looking character, it's most likely that the System gave Evie a task with no way out and so chose death before harming her beloved. As she lay dying, however, Elsa was able to perceive the System and so set out to save Evie. The only problem was: how do you beat something that's apparently unbeatable. Well, it took a lot of trial and error, and many trips to the past, but she finally cracked it, and is now ready for the real attempt.

oh they are falling HARD for each other now

anyways the cloaked person looks very much like elsa and considering that most of the characters are fairly unique looking in comparison to each other, i don’t think it’s a coincidence

Come on, Evie, make your dream a reality already

Shia Labeouf time. Inhales Don't let your dreams be dreams! JUST DO IT (HER), YVONNE!

Also, Sepheron? Mage & Demon Queen crossover?