As to the comments about not liking the side characters taking over, it was 2 chapters for the twins that were used directly to push the plot along.
I feel like this is missing the complaint pretty badly. Every chapter has been about a side couple for quite a while now, not just the twins. Which is, I guess, the whole theme of the manga - the main character just wants to watch other yuri couples, so we get to watch other yuri couples. But they're so bland that I literally can't distinguish half of them, and making your main character into a mob who doesn't participate in her own story is... a bold gambit. It reminds me of Kindred Spirits on the Roof, actually, but that did a much better job of executing on the concept, IMO.
but it's not focusing on the side characters to the detriment of the main couple
I'd argue it pretty much is. I'm not going to go count but it feels like Watanabe and Yoshioka tend to only get 3 or 4 pages of focus per chapter, and I find myself rapidly clicking next page through every chapter until they interact in some form.
I will give credit, though, it's amazing how hard Yoshioka manages to carry this. It seems like almost everyone commenting is still reading just for her, myself included.
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