put off finishing this for a while, but after finishing it i think ive come to the conclusion that i hate it.
i thought it was really good for the first half, but as soon as Mary showed up it went up in flames.
you took a light hearted yuri hijinks manga and put in a random NTR rape scene where mary took nanases first time while momo watched and nanase started to actually get off on it, what the hell. Right after one rival subplot is solved, they add another just to get the plot going again. Mary is a scumbag obviously, but this series of chapters also completely ruined nanase for me, for going along with it, then proceeding to forgive her, then having momos friends blame momo for not being clear with her feelings was the final nail in the coffin. Mary did not deserve forgiveness, and definitely did not deserve a 'do over' at being friends with nanase, and Momo deserves better.
i say this as someone who loves angst in yuri, but this was ungodly forced and just made me hate every character involved while feeling bad for momo. The side characters were worth staying around for, but the nanase and momo relationship is forever tainted to me.