The artwork is stunning... a work of passion versus cramming for deadlines and pay.  It’s funny to see a story originally published in english, made into a foreign language manga, then translated back to english.  I wonder: which party is having a conniption right now?  The owner of the intellectual property, or the artist who’s work is illegally translated back to english?
All I can say is seeing this manga deadens the experience of reading yuri manga.  I mean, the entire pages of this work are filled with details for setting and atmosphere... there is no dead space/white space.  Very few manga here, and usually they’re picked up for publication in the states, can match the level of artistry in this manga.