Nevrilicious Scans
joined Jun 5, 2015
sheska posted:
Why is it such a big deal that this is a LN? It has a great plot, few but wonderful illustrations, and interesting character development. Yuri is Yuri regardless if it's written text or a bunch of pictures. Personally I enjoyed it and I can't wait for future chapters
LN is just too mundane, I'd rather read VN than LN.
Yea, because books are boring by default. There is no way to tell a good story through them without sound and movement to keep your attention, I am right?
Rainillo posted:
Well, this story started interesting until it went kinda too hentai for me in the end. The second sex scene just felt too forced and honestly kind of out of nowhere. Maybe the princess being startled on Rem leaving the room and her reaction on Rem finding out the grimoires would be more interesting for me than a cliche drug induced love making. Idk just me.
The first part was a good read though, I like how it described the world of the elf village, how Rem's general relationship with the town is and how she journeyed out of those walls. It was great! I'm looking forward to how this story progresses maybe with a less tone on the obvious sex for sex sake. It would be nice to see how their relationship would grow from this.
I completely agree. I really liked how well Rem character and life was fleshed out. Her running away was very well done. I'm not going to lie I had few assumptions about plot based on title alone (that Rem x Princess will be OTP), so once I got the feeling of the story I started to have certain expectations of where it will go. So I was really disappointed how the whole mansion part was handled. As I feel sorry for our poor elf I really wished princess would turn out to be the one who will be nice to her, but we all know how it went. Possibility of them bonding and becoming closer is still there, I just thought we will already get it in this chapter. When we got to sex I realized I'm reading smut, so I didn't really mind those elements, especially since first one was executed really well and was just hot. Second one on the other hand was totally forced. I understand it was used to explain aphrodisiac thing and make princess turn into cat in front of Rem, but I'm sure it could be done differently or sex itself could be written better. At this point I really wanted to see them talk and interact. On that topic. While from my understanding it does make sense why princess would use it, I was at the same time disappointed by its inclusion. I hoped it was instead a part of princess curse (you know, while keeping with cat theme, going into heat?) and she was spreading some kind of pheromones which affected Rem. Alternatively she simply got turned on because of her inner gayness/princess smell without understanding what is going on (she is called Lesbian Elf after all). Last option, for whatever reason she could react to princess stronger than others because she is elf (or they have some special spiritual connection or something like that). And last thing, while author do remember Rem didn't eat for days, the fact it wasn't addressed yet and it doesn't seem to really affect Rem in any negative way is really starting to chip on my suspension of disbelief. And it is a really stupid reason to lose it over, so eat something already yuri damn it!
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