I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Not good enough, you need to go further

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Well, careful not to *over*polish, too. It's easy to get caught up in tweaking minutae and spinning your wheels.

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Well, careful not to *over*polish, too. It's easy to get caught up in tweaking minutae and spinning your wheels.

I hear ya. My current issue is that I have crafted Act I and Act III, and I am 98% happy with them. But Act II is proving to be elusive.

I understand this story is somewhat focused around BDSM, but I really can't get down with the main character basically assaulting the waitress in the bathroom without her consent. Consent is so important, especially in BDSM. I know it's a fictitious story, but depicting consent in these and other situations is really important and I think needs to be represented more.

"Nieve" in page 1 on chapter 14.

I swear every time I see Peta, I feel like calling PETA...at least that would be more interesting than this mess of the story (you can say I could stop but I really like to read/watch bad stories, helps me understand what not to do when comes to stories).

last edited at Oct 31, 2016 3:39PM

I like how the thumbnails for ch12+13 are lined up in the Most Popular of Past 7 Days section right now

I like how the thumbnails for ch12+13 are lined up in the Most Popular of Past 7 Days section right now

Felt like preserving this sight

I looked through the raws and from what I can tell I'm actually really liking the story.

It's kind of in the tradition of Harlequin/Paperback Romance (not necessarily the company but books associated with that style), something I wish that lesbian stories could have more of. It's not that the current offerings don't offer good romance with great role models of real actual relationships you'd want to emulate, but there is something I find lovably trashy about the nature of Harlequin that is nice to get to read with lesbians.

I RILLY wish one of the two protagonists had dark hair, because I often find them impossible to tell apart.

Looks like new updates are delayed because the author is redoing it in color for an unspecified reason. I was pretty confused at why the newest raw had no tones until I read that. So you'll get your wish. :)

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I RILLY wish one of the two protagonists had dark hair, because I often find them impossible to tell apart.

Looks like new updates are delayed because the author is redoing it in color for an unspecified reason. I was pretty confused at why the newest raw had no tones until I read that. So you'll get your wish. :)

Sorry to tell you bad news but we won't publish color version ^^"

I RILLY wish one of the two protagonists had dark hair, because I often find them impossible to tell apart.

Looks like new updates are delayed because the author is redoing it in color for an unspecified reason. I was pretty confused at why the newest raw had no tones until I read that. So you'll get your wish. :)

Sorry to tell you bad news but we won't publish color version ^^"

Ahhh, is it for selling commercially? Well, it's fine by me. I prefer it Black and White and have no problem telling them apart. :)

last edited at Nov 12, 2016 1:30PM

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Well, careful not to *over*polish, too. It's easy to get caught up in tweaking minutae and spinning your wheels.

I hear ya. My current issue is that I have crafted Act I and Act III, and I am 98% happy with them. But Act II is proving to be elusive.

In the unlikely event that anybody cares, I have finished my script and would be interested in some beta testers. Dunno how I'd get it to you privately, though. I guess you can PM me over on Reddit under the same username if you want.

This really got my attention now.

waiting for new update . . . T_T

its been awhile is a new update upcoming? and how far is the raw along vs the translations? just curious since the story is getting better by the ch...

Still hoping they will get the time to translate it.

I really liked the setting of this manhwa(?)

last edited at Jan 18, 2017 12:29AM

The mistress story is on haute?
Thank you who ever answered

Well there hasn't been a new chapter of the Thai version since November so even if they go on hiatus for the translation they're not really getting behind.

Just can't take this seriously.

Just can't take this seriously.

I can't agree more.

That was pretty cute.

And the art has improved!

I want to be with her! and love her! But because i need the story(?) to keep going.. I must act like i don't care!

Well... it is not as awful as the first chapters, so... improvement. I guess. Forced drama is still forced, though.

just tell her you liker her jfc

Omg are we finally going somewhere? Breaths in
I smell Yuri! Woooooo! Won't be long now, brethren!