So sweet! :D

So Fluffy :3

It made feel ease

I like this, because it's such a "normal" insecurity. I look at my girlfriend daily and can't help but wonder "why am I so lucky?" or "why did she pick someone like me?".

I really liked Yuka's cake analogy as well.

This author draws the most adorable smiles.

So... I kinda read it like Satoko was basically right about Yuka not actually being in love with her, but rather than her wanting to be nice to a friend or doing it out of obligation or whatever, it's that Yuka wanted to feel loved? Or that she was moved by Satoko's feelings and wanted to hold on to them? That's not a terrible place to start a relationship, and it certainly doesn't seem like Yuka's against being with a girl, but I don't know if it's terribly reassuring for the kind of insecurities Satoko has. In that case, I can see her worrying about whether anyone else would do just as well if they also confessed to Yuka, or if Yuka might find someone she actively wants to be with instead of just passively appreciating Satoko's feelings.

But that seems a little incongruously pessimistic and uncertain for the seemingly bright and cozy tone at the ending, so I don't know if that's actually what the author was going for. Not sure what to make of it.

^ Not sure I read it like that - I thought her saying she likes the unique slice with santa on top, she wants to keep it all to herself and be the only one to taste it - was her saying she wanted Satoko all to herself too so it was ok for her to make her hers.

Anyways I liked it :)

have your cake and eat it too

What great potential for a backstory! It could describe how Satoko started to fall for Yuka, how she perceived this, and her initial personal reaction. Think of the emotions, the rationalizing, the details!

That was just nice.

have your cake and eat it too

l-lewd!

I like this, because it's such a "normal" insecurity. I look at my girlfriend daily and can't help but wonder "why am I so lucky?" or "why did she pick someone like me?".

I really liked Yuka's cake analogy as well.

Me 2 the cake analogy, sorry cannot relate to the girlfriend part as these days it has been great disappoints for me.

have your cake and eat it too

l-lewd!

WoHoo!!!

Nnnnnnnaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww =w= this is just freakin adriable >//3//<

Saccharin sweet.

Whoops! They completely forgot to story!

So... I kinda read it like Satoko was basically right about Yuka not actually being in love with her, but rather than her wanting to be nice to a friend or doing it out of obligation or whatever, it's that Yuka wanted to feel loved? Or that she was moved by Satoko's feelings and wanted to hold on to them? That's not a terrible place to start a relationship, and it certainly doesn't seem like Yuka's against being with a girl, but I don't know if it's terribly reassuring for the kind of insecurities Satoko has. In that case, I can see her worrying about whether anyone else would do just as well if they also confessed to Yuka, or if Yuka might find someone she actively wants to be with instead of just passively appreciating Satoko's feelings.

But that seems a little incongruously pessimistic and uncertain for the seemingly bright and cozy tone at the ending, so I don't know if that's actually what the author was going for. Not sure what to make of it.

So I read more in between the lines...remember her big problem was that her best friend that she started to like knew her so well that she knew she liked her that way, so she notices when she acts strange, and then trys to re-assure her with the love umbrella...that doesn't work so she clumsily confessed by way of metaphor, and ahem an invitation to taste her since they're alone ^_^ (so lewd <3 )
And the clumsy scarf, and hand holding followed by a happy go lucky kiss at the end is a reflection of their intimacy after becoming true lovers(i mean they have been dating a month already)
But maybe im reading too much into it o.O heh ;)

This is totally Nanoha and Fate. Lel. Made my day. Haa.

Damm

Too cute

BTW, if you're curious: 300F / 150C, approximately. Or so the Internet informs me.

Ruequi posted:

This is totally Nanoha and Fate. Lel. Made my day. Haa.

Now I can't see it any other way!

Awww I spied trouble, but everything turned out okay!

amid stories with lots of dramas, i love this kind of story once in a while

Real interesting

This is totally Nanoha and Fate. Lel. Made my day. Haa.

yes i think my eyes don't deceive me!