Oh
My
God

As a writer myself, this has to be one of the best Oneshots I've read, in terms of character depth. The author's characterization shone brightly alongside the logic and motives of each character.

I actually held my breath whilst reading each page

Frickin amazing

Triple yandere? C-c-combo~

holy shit its beautiful
the sayolara we shouldve gotten
actual peak

better ending that you know what

I know that this was written entirely seperately, and they're just drawing from the same source material, but I do find the idea supremely funny.

Lara was just so controversial it woke up every sapphic writer and made them collectivelly go "Nah, I can do better. Bet."

they're all perfect for each other

It’s ok?
The pacing between pages or the “mini-arcs” feel a little, idk, it’s like someone is breaking the 4th wall and saying “Let me tell how this really happened” it gives me the same feeling
The art is stunning, I am glad it’s between two mermaids, and I like that she in fact did it for her own sake, not to help others but again, it bothers me that the plot twist in most toxic yuri is that the toxicity is mutual

I know that this was written entirely seperately, and they're just drawing from the same source material, but I do find the idea supremely funny.

Lara was just so controversial it woke up every sapphic writer and made them collectivelly go "Nah, I can do better. Bet."

(I forgot to mention this in the notes, but this oneshot just happened to release 1 week before Sayonara Lara’s premiere lol)

Guys why is "I can make her worse" soooooooo good?
It shouldn't be. But it is!
I can't look away. I love it!

Well, the art and imagery are beautiful

Im crying omw to school this is too beautiful ;-;

why do they need to do all that?

Ugh, terrible and gorgeous. May their reign of a tempestuous sea run long and deep. <3

Im crying omw to school this is too beautiful ;-;

same but im on the bus to work, absolute peak...

I did not expect the triple yandere at the start.
This was fun. They all totally deserve each other.

Oh my, I..
I was kind of hoping it didn't go down the route of 'the princess was super yandere for her too and would get super jealous', but.. christ almighty, that was SO bloody good. (Bloody, in both senses of the word!)

Well, uh, they'll be happy together; all four of them, I hope.

The fiance is out of the loop though, feel a bit bad for her.

These poor unfortunate souls make Ursula seem reasonable. Why is everyone here insane? Must be something in the water.

Does Halniya get her voice back from Aysha stabbing the prince, watching the stabbing, or because she struck a better deal with the witch? And does Aysha ever get her voice back by recognizing Halniya's reciprocation of her love, or no? Do they turn into foam at the end? I don't quite know how to interpret those bits and details

superb oneshot.

Absolutely amazing. In the end Ursula was the only sane, mentally well-put together individual. Brilliant. Loved the characters, loved the yanderism (that isn't a word but it is on now), loved the story.

I did not expect the prince to end up being equally unhinged as the two mermaids, figured he was just a throw-away character as is so often the case with characters like him. I liked it. Stories about toxic relationships are more enjoyable when everyone involved is a mess

fun but entirely too convoluted, definitely something where it feels like everything was written backwards from the conclusion.

incredible story. and tbh i had a feeling something was fishy (lol) about the prince from his first appearance, because he's got this weird grin on his face. makes him seem like he's hiding something. the love interest mermaid's thing though was a total twist, i didn't see that coming at all. makes her kind of feral looking eyes even cuter

What in the yandere? I guess everyone got what they wanted. Happy ending....?