ForumTenbin wa Hana to Asobu discussion

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joined May 21, 2013

I feel like this ended really abruptly. What about Youko's fiancee? He was spoken about in the last chapter as if to bring about a love triangle and then the series ended. The end. The mangaka didn't explain anything about this fiancee and didn't explicitly state how Youko felt about him. All we know is that Youko rushed from dinner with her fiancee to check up on Shuu and suddenly, on a whim, kiss Shuu with a bleeding mouth to make her drink the blood she needed. Youko then doesn't explain that kiss with "because I love you," but with "I didn't think about it because you were frantic." And with that, we have no confirmation about her feelings at all, with Shuu's big confession scene being pushed under the rug like that and all.

This raises some questions. Was Shuu's love onesided? Was Youko really in love with Shuu but wanted to appease her family? It's made a point that Youko is always happy-go-lucky, and then all of a sudden it is revealed that she is from a high pristine family and "oh, by the way, Youko doesn't really have much of a choice in life. That's why she was encouraging Shuu to make her own choices."

Really, it feels like that "fiancee" part was just a valid reason to force a "Shuu wants to be male" ending--which was what it originally was anyway.

tl;dr There were too many problems for the mangaka to solve and bind together, so they decided "Let's end it but not solve anything at all!"

Z%20ss
joined Oct 15, 2013

Oh God... this manga... I read it long ago and was pissed by the end... ughhh... Waste of time imho.

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joined Dec 18, 2013

Are you kidding me? It really 'ends' like that?

Man, now I'm pissed.

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joined Apr 29, 2014

And with that, we have no confirmation about her feelings at all, with Shuu's big confession scene being pushed under the rug like that and all.

Yeah it's like the ending to a harem series where there's no resolution and a kind of 'the decision can wait' attitude. But I guess at least they finished it rather than having even more questions unanswered...

Also, when Youko sees Shuu biting the nurse/doctor?/brother and later Misora, too, wouldn't sexual deviant come before vampire as a better way of explaining it away? Rather than, "hmm, lets trust this new student who looks like she'd sell her soul for friends!"

joined Mar 9, 2014

sad ;-;
its complete
and i want shuu to be a girl ;-;
she will become a girl u cause she will be too addicted to Youko's blood

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joined Nov 20, 2014

Great Scott, this was so disappointing. I mean, I know I really couldn't expect much what with such a sudden twist at the end of the second-to-last chapter, but they really didn't answer anything.

The setting, as ridiculous as it was, was at least intriguing. The shipping was kinda cute (and with so many more characters really could go anywhere). A plot twist where we find out Youko has a fiancé, that really doesn't lead anywhere...

Sorry Unohana-sensei, not a fan.

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joined Apr 27, 2014

...eh? I was so hyped with this title...then it just ended...like that. MEH u__u what a waste,also I was hoping for some explanation about Youko's skills,super fast,great sense of smell, come on!

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joined Sep 11, 2014

The ending reminds me of Divine Love Alone: sudden end w/o explanations.

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joined Jun 12, 2015

O_o That last chapter, what a slap in the face for all yuri fans.

Fennec
joined May 28, 2012

Even porn like Milky Succubus Lilly has a better plot than this.

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joined Feb 24, 2015

Bad end...completely upset.

Popcorn
joined Jun 5, 2015

It has been axed.

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joined Aug 16, 2014

I personally feel as though Shuu would have ended choosing to be a girl. While yes she would have thought about picking male for a while the fact arises that she has lived her entire life as a girl, she wouldn't know anything about the standard way a man lives. Not to mention the fact that she met Youko as a girl, for her two girls being in a relationship may seem more natural, you can see that she was very worried about becoming a man, so if someone told her that two girls could be in a relationship then I think she would decide to stay female.

In my own head I decided that after these events Shuu, Youko, Misori and the girl that confessed to Youko ended up with a lovable foursome relationship, while Aika and her friend got together as well.

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joined Jul 22, 2015

Honestly this would be one of my all-time favorite stories, but sadly it wasn't ever truly completed.

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joined Sep 19, 2015

I feel like this ended really abruptly. What about Youko's fiancee? He was spoken about in the last chapter as if to bring about a love triangle and then the series ended. The end. The mangaka didn't explain anything about this fiancee and didn't explicitly state how Youko felt about him. All we know is that Youko rushed from dinner with her fiancee to check up on Shuu and suddenly, on a whim, kiss Shuu with a bleeding mouth to make her drink the blood she needed. Youko then doesn't explain that kiss with "because I love you," but with "I didn't think about it because you were frantic." And with that, we have no confirmation about her feelings at all, with Shuu's big confession scene being pushed under the rug like that and all.

This raises some questions. Was Shuu's love onesided? Was Youko really in love with Shuu but wanted to appease her family? It's made a point that Youko is always happy-go-lucky, and then all of a sudden it is revealed that she is from a high pristine family and "oh, by the way, Youko doesn't really have much of a choice in life. That's why she was encouraging Shuu to make her own choices."

Really, it feels like that "fiancee" part was just a valid reason to force a "Shuu wants to be male" ending--which was what it originally was anyway.

tl;dr There were too many problems for the mangaka to solve and bind together, so they decided "Let's end it but not solve anything at all!"

I agree with you (sigh)

last edited at Oct 18, 2015 7:33PM

Top%20tier
joined May 13, 2015

lmao I reread it now, and I remember why I put it behind a while ago, there was never a definite ending

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joined Oct 15, 2014

Now I'm regretting for reread this manga.....damn......

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joined Feb 1, 2016

lol, this isn't yuri.
It's just genderbender hetshit.

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joined Feb 15, 2013

It's not that bad isn't it? Basically it gonna be Shuu x Shouko regardless of which gender Shuu pick.

Knowing Shuu taste, she will keep drinking Shouko blood however = yuri almost ensured

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joined Mar 26, 2014

O_o That last chapter, what a slap in the face for all yuri fans.

XD Hahahaha

joined Apr 28, 2016

Well that was quite unfinished.

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joined Mar 29, 2013

Here's what I imagine following the final chapter...

Shuu confesses to Youko and tells her she'll become a male to be with her. And then Youko says... "But I'm a lesbian; If you want to win me, you'd better become a female! That's why I've been pushing my blood on you after all."

Yuri goggles at warp factor 9.5 (I'll see myself out now.)

last edited at Feb 19, 2017 10:19PM

Hinataskype
joined May 26, 2011

It's been a few years since I read this I forgot how abruptly it ended. D'oh! If only it had gotten to continue on, there was so much good and cute stuff going.

Yatsude
joined Jun 27, 2014

Here's what I imagine following the final chapter...

Shuu confesses to Youko and tells her she'll become a male to be with her. And then Youko says... "But I'm a lesbian; If you want to win me, you'd better become a female! That's why I've been pushing my blood on you after all."

Yuri goggles at warp factor 9.5 (I'll see myself out now.)

Actually that's how I'd love for it to end as well

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joined Oct 31, 2016

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