Not sure where the “overarching judgement” part comes from—all I’m saying is that at this point “uselessness” in yuri is becoming less simply a character type (like “tsundere”) that can be inserted almost anywhere (although it also remains that) and more like a story type that can ring any number of changes along the “awareness,” “self-awareness,” and “confession” trajectories (among others).
I honestly do not remember what my thought process was when I wrote that. I think I thought you were criticizing something and wanted to offer my perspective, but I do not think it matters much. I absolutely agree that "uselessness" is becoming much more than a "simple" character trait, and I'm wholly in favor of this, too.
My main point had to do with the audience reaction to that story type—since usually for much of the story readers are put in the position of being substantially more aware of the characters’ feelings than they are themselves (or are willing to admit to themselves or to others), some readers quickly get frustrated with the inherent delay and start scolding the characters for being “cowards” and telling them to “grow some ovaries,” etc. Which for these kinds of stories is basically wishing the story away.
Now I understand more clearly what you meant, and with this specific point I also agree wholeheartedly. I think that in general, it can sometimes be hard to distinguish that we as readers/meta-observers know far more than in-story/in-universe individuals, especially if one is really invested in a character or something similar. If I'm being honest, I also do this at times. It's usually less from a "grow some ovaries" place for me and more "this could have been such a great moment", but I'm no saint regardless.
In any case, about the chapter - I love the shift in perspective. It gives depth and context to Hinoka's behavior beforehand. She looked like she was aware, and there were points where it seemed like she was awkwardly trying to make moves, and it appears that she was awkwardly trying to make moves. I'm loving this.
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