huh, kinda surprised to the rather mixed reception I've seen this new vertion get, I don't think is that particularly fast paced really, it's basically the second half of the second chapter of the LN, "Future Fishing", but just removing the little blue girl and Shimamura's friends, more than likely for the sake of having the focus only on the two mains for the first chapter, it does lose some context of Shimamura's inner thoughts since those were following her chat with Yashiro but other than that I think it was a pretty nice chapter personally.
Nothing remplaces the original LN, and it's unfourtunate that the 4-koma version only made it at 3 volumes (hopefully it reached a nice point to end) since I also enjoy that one, but I am all for a "regular manga format" version of this story.
I am sucker for a manga with good use of panel composition, and while nothing really "great", I particularly like the use in pages 16, how it looked like they staring each other through the same page but from different panels, 17-18 with the panels foocus on their movement, 33 onhow it follow Shimamura's expression and inner thoughts and the set up-fake out in 34 and 35, I am gonna throw a dart at the dark and guess Yashiro also received mixed opinions over there lol.
As for the tone, I should re-read the first manga to fully confirm, but I feel like this one catches the overall feel of the LN a bit better, or at least the way how I think of it anyway, like all three are Slice of Life, comedy and yuri, I agree that this manga feels more focused on the yuri side while I personally feel the first one was more focus on the comedy side of it, again I should probably re-read it properly, but at least checking chaper 4, it feels that way to me.
I don't really feel their personalities really changed either, Adachi is less awkard but really at this point in the story, without her POV still not shown how much head over heels she is about Shimamura, and without the supporting cast it isn't shown how super awkard she is around other people, so sshe feel around awkard enough for me at this point of the story and Shimamura being less oblivious seems that way thanks to the focus of the chapter on selling the yuri angles, really, the lines that may make her seem less oblivious are also in the LN.
It's a bummer that the enire first chapter got skiped, though who knows it may be done eventually, but I am guessing Moke (assuming they are who made the desicion) wanted to use this chapter to show as many different beats of the main character's relationship in a single chapter to catch the attention of any reader who hasn't read the LN.
(Also, unless Yashiro REALLY didn't matter in the later LN volumes and was really just a crossover character/"early installment weirdness character" I am guessing she will appear eventually and was just excluded for the sake of not taking atention away from the mains)
Anyway, since I 've been procrastinating the last handfull of days and there won't be a Nettaigyo chapter this month, I've been thinking a lot in Adashimamura so I wanted to share my thoughs about the first chapter of this new adaptation, looking foward to following it!
Thanks a lot for all your work in this franchise sneikkimies!
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