I like this new version based on this chapter so far. It has more romantic undertones granted that it sacrificed some scenes (& characters) but I think it made it up with the character expressions and the non 4-koma format to really dramatise the scenes. Of course it’s all preferential. I liked the earlier version but I love this more fast-paced, more romantic and less random (with the introduction of the little alien, albeit she was cute) version of Adachi & Shimamura.
Thanks to the scanlators! always grateful for new, quality yuri content.