ForumSweet Gap discussion

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joined Jan 9, 2014

This progressed fast. Seems rushed, even on the first chapter.

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joined Nov 9, 2017

If anything, it just felt like it jumped around too much and was kind of difficult to follow. I wasn’t always exactly sure what was even going on, tbh.

Mask
joined Jan 6, 2015

Oh my. I like it!

006
joined Jan 26, 2017

Wtf, the girl just droped her panties on the beach like it was nothing.

Pickle%20hitler
joined Jun 18, 2017

Wtf, the girl just droped her panties on the beach like it was nothing.

I think it was that she mistook her sister's(? aunt's?) panties for a handkerchief.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

Wtf, the girl just droped her panties on the beach like it was nothing.

I think it was that she mistook her sister's(? aunt's?) panties for a handkerchief.

As indicated by her calling it (them) “my handkerchief.”

Prprcharlotte_8
joined Apr 1, 2013

I am okay with this story if it goes through all the cliché like some kind of parody.... but if not it's way too rushed and messy.

Fennec
joined May 28, 2012

This progressed fast. Seems rushed, even on the first chapter.

And the sex just suddenly came out of nowhere. Well, it's from Aya-yuri after all, so that's understandable.
Could be at least a porn with some decent plot though.

joined Jul 24, 2017

This went by so fucking fast

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joined Apr 14, 2017

All, I could manage to say was, bruh.

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joined Nov 2, 2013

Im soo tired of the trope of people falling in love instantly. Thats not how it works. Im not gonna care about the story with no proper build up.

Large
joined Nov 25, 2018

Well, it was a little rush but I enjoy it

Mari%20-%20gf
joined Apr 1, 2015

And she used to fall down a lot
That girl was always falling
Again and again
And I used to sometimes try to catch her
But I never even caught her name

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joined Oct 6, 2015

There are so many things happening. Loool

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joined Nov 14, 2016

Girl, you're going to fast! You don't even know her name yet!

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joined Nov 11, 2018

Finally new yuri n more chapter author please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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joined Apr 20, 2013

It feels like this was a sequel, so much info throw at us and then sex... It is messy yeah, but nothing a chapter 2 and 3 can't fix!!! probably!!!!

The reaction at the end, that's very understandable lol

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joined Nov 18, 2017

I can't tell if it's rushed on purpose or not. It's a deconstruction of stereotypical love stories, so maybe?

Hogfather
Kouyuri
joined Jan 25, 2016

Like everyone says, this is way too rushed. Also, the sex seemed pointless. I think I’ll pass on this one for now...

DR2 Hajime Hinata
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joined Jul 20, 2016

Yikes she got rejected on the first chapter

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joined Nov 16, 2015

I can't tell if it's rushed on purpose or not. It's a deconstruction of stereotypical love stories, so maybe?

It does have the comedy tag on it so it could be for that purpose

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joined Mar 16, 2018

That was a mess of an opening salvo

Also, the sex was really forced in there and a bit off putting

Still, it does have a tomboy love interest so I'm at least a little interested in reading more.

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joined Aug 26, 2018

Omg this is amazing. I love the duality of smutty and fluffy yuri.

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Zefiberyl Translations
joined Apr 11, 2011

A serial by Aoko? 2019 is turning out great already. Thank you Yuri Project. (Although the translation is a bit wooden in parts.)

Youmu%20shades
joined Aug 18, 2015

Finally new yuri n more chapter author please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are aware the authors of all these manga have nothing to do with this site, right? None of them come here, or are likely even aware it exists. If you're begging the authors for more chapters here then you're barking up the wrong tree.

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