This progressed fast. Seems rushed, even on the first chapter.

If anything, it just felt like it jumped around too much and was kind of difficult to follow. I wasn’t always exactly sure what was even going on, tbh.

Oh my. I like it!

Wtf, the girl just droped her panties on the beach like it was nothing.

I think it was that she mistook her sister's(? aunt's?) panties for a handkerchief.

Wtf, the girl just droped her panties on the beach like it was nothing.

I think it was that she mistook her sister's(? aunt's?) panties for a handkerchief.

As indicated by her calling it (them) “my handkerchief.”

I am okay with this story if it goes through all the cliché like some kind of parody.... but if not it's way too rushed and messy.

This progressed fast. Seems rushed, even on the first chapter.

And the sex just suddenly came out of nowhere. Well, it's from Aya-yuri after all, so that's understandable.
Could be at least a porn with some decent plot though.

This went by so fucking fast

All, I could manage to say was, bruh.

Im soo tired of the trope of people falling in love instantly. Thats not how it works. Im not gonna care about the story with no proper build up.

Well, it was a little rush but I enjoy it

And she used to fall down a lot
That girl was always falling
Again and again
And I used to sometimes try to catch her
But I never even caught her name

There are so many things happening. Loool

Girl, you're going to fast! You don't even know her name yet!

Finally new yuri n more chapter author please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It feels like this was a sequel, so much info throw at us and then sex... It is messy yeah, but nothing a chapter 2 and 3 can't fix!!! probably!!!!

The reaction at the end, that's very understandable lol

I can't tell if it's rushed on purpose or not. It's a deconstruction of stereotypical love stories, so maybe?

Like everyone says, this is way too rushed. Also, the sex seemed pointless. I think I’ll pass on this one for now...

Yikes she got rejected on the first chapter

I can't tell if it's rushed on purpose or not. It's a deconstruction of stereotypical love stories, so maybe?

It does have the comedy tag on it so it could be for that purpose

That was a mess of an opening salvo

Also, the sex was really forced in there and a bit off putting

Still, it does have a tomboy love interest so I'm at least a little interested in reading more.

Omg this is amazing. I love the duality of smutty and fluffy yuri.

A serial by Aoko? 2019 is turning out great already. Thank you Yuri Project. (Although the translation is a bit wooden in parts.)

Finally new yuri n more chapter author please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are aware the authors of all these manga have nothing to do with this site, right? None of them come here, or are likely even aware it exists. If you're begging the authors for more chapters here then you're barking up the wrong tree.

When the sex started, I almost thought it was Mira. lol