Someone said a while ago that this series feels like it has "connection issues", since it feels like it's dropping frames (or rather, panels) and I have to agree, especially in the later chapters. The conversations have an awkward flow because of this. The style does work for some of the jokes, but the chapters often power through conversations so fast that even the moments that are probably meant to be taken a little more seriously have no time to breathe. I get that this is an indie pixiv comic but I feel like the author doesn't always know how to work with the short format.
last edited at Nov 19, 2018 8:22PM