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UraYukimitsu
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joined May 21, 2023

I just listened to one on youtube and I can't say "doink" feels like a particularly good representation of the sound.

Also, I appreciate the translation note for both context and some insight into how the translation process works. Thank you for including it.

Thank you very much! If even one person thinks the localization note was cool then it was worth including it :)

To give my own two cents on the translation: I can't but associate "doink" as a particulary funny euphemism for sex (I blame Zach Weinersmith) ,so I very much appreciate the sploosh, which alignes pleasingly to the authorial intent.

I wasn't even aware of "doink" being a (somewhat) standard localization for that SFX, but either way I figured the context would be lost with a more literal translation.

Why is blondie not named yet. Ren keeps calling her "this girl." Is she not your friend??

Her name is Itsuki.

Chapter 7 page 3 bottom panel Rei calls out to her with her name before carrying on, on page 4, with asking Itsuki to "come over for a bit".

Chapter 8 page 3 bottom panel, on the phone the post of the toffee apples (?) says "with Itsuki"

[Edit: To be fair Itsuki does say, at Chapter 7 page 4, bottom panel that triggered the whole "sploosh/kapoon" discussion, "It's been a while since she called me by name"]

And to be even more fair that comment was posted shortly before chapter 7 came out haha

joined Nov 12, 2021

Does the ongoing status refer to the translation status? If not, this should really be tagged with the hiatus status considering the original was last updated in 2023.

Astraea Hill
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joined Aug 17, 2012

And to be even more fair that comment was posted shortly before chapter 7 came out haha

Apologies for that, I didn't look at the timings

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joined Mar 4, 2018

Keep soldiering, Yellow. You've nearly got her.

joined Apr 9, 2025

The full grey panel in chapter 8 was a tiny bit jarring to me, I don’t know why. The fully grey image of rei was just ‘off’? Idk

Img_5712
joined Jan 3, 2022

Girl’s got some tsun tsun energy for sure

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Noticing.

Roody
joined Feb 11, 2022

She's more than just conscious of you girl.

The immaculate
joined Mar 19, 2020

its funny since this seems somewhat different than her relationship with her first love

3737720892d1604e82a1e6a88a44b5f5
joined Jul 29, 2024

she's definitely conscious of you

Pov_youre_a_triple_mugger
joined Feb 19, 2016

I thought they were almost going to kiss
Dammit all!

1453e55cc3ab545974cae651c20afaf3
joined May 28, 2021

It's getting real hard to not be on team yellow at this point. I really want her to be happy ­­­;(

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joined Jul 21, 2024

Itsuki really is the best, also happy pride month y'all (^ 3 ^)

butches-and-chicken
Cachorra
joined Jun 12, 2023

I love Itsuki!! I wish her happiness!!

joined May 3, 2014

Ah a good wholesome yuri! good for the heart

Pov_youre_a_triple_mugger
joined Feb 19, 2016

This trio is the trifecta of good looking girls
Rei is cute
Ren is pretty
Itsuki is hot
Also delinquent backstory let's gooooo, we love delinquent yuri

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Cute. ^_^

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

i need more yuri butches. more than air. more than water.

she was a DELINQUENT TOO!!

D5
joined Apr 10, 2024

It's getting real hard to not be on team yellow at this point. I really want her to be happy ­­­;(

She doesn't know it yet, but like 90% of gay girls that she meets for the rest of her life are going to fall for her hard. (and a lot of straight boys ftm)

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joined Sep 21, 2019

from little gay to big gay

3737720892d1604e82a1e6a88a44b5f5
joined Jul 29, 2024

yeah I am hardcore rooting for them now

Palucina1
joined May 26, 2020

I kinda wanted to see the fight with the other school. (cause it woulda been hot and stuff)

3737720892d1604e82a1e6a88a44b5f5
joined Jul 29, 2024

I kinda wanted to see the fight with the other school. (cause it woulda been hot and stuff)

agreed, I want to see more flashbacks of her delinquent 'phase'

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joined Nov 13, 2022

"A reflex" ummmmm XD

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joined Jan 3, 2022

That slap was undeserved, she tried messing with her while she was sleeping lol

"A reflex" ummmmm XD

If she can fight, I can def see how she’d reflexively defend herself from someone she didn’t know touching her while she slept

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