@ All the Other Members that Commented and Debated
I just wanted to say a big thanks to everyone. Despite my total dislike of the story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and taking part in the debate that erupted around the story. I'm positive that our heated discussion would make Amano squeal with glee at our blood, sweat, and tears shed over her story. Again, thanks to everyone ...
Yes, thanks everybody. It was fun! Although it sure was tense sometimes.
All in all this work is well-narrated and really kept me on the edge of my seat. I thought I was beginning to dislike it, but I its high quality wins me over in the end. Some things didn't seem necessary, the whole deadly sins jazz but reading the author's thoughts I figure it was just a vague idea she never meant to flesh out.
Two things I found confusing in the extra and afterword (being confused always takes away enjoyment):
Maybe it was mentioned before, but I feel that I was just expected to swallow that Remi's family is rich too and runs a company which just conveniently happens to be somewhat useful to Maasa's clothing company, so Maasa has a reason to keep in touch with Remi, laying the foundation for future drama? sigh
But seing a dazzled Remi was nice. Is that supposed to be a Remi Meru Maasa triangle?
And who is going to study abroad? Remi, Maasa and Meru have jobs, Asuna is starting as a teach, Fueko is going to be a NEET, which leaves Sachi and Ruki but I don't see why a kindergarten teacher needs to go abroad and Ruki would never leave Sachi's side (because she's scared).
Coincidentally, right now I'm on my way to my own graduation day. Master GET! \o/
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