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ciega
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Stop the presses! When did Haruka and Kanae become a couple and/or confess to each other? and if there wasn't a confession previously, was Haruka's answer a confession?

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umm.... that was rather abrupt.

ciega
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saw the tags for this one. got confused when I saw wholesome and violence.

this wasn't very violent, but it was very wholesome and name drop city.

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I didn't realize saying,"i'm gonna be late" with with in your mouth was a thing. oh the things we learn :)

ciega
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I... I'm still not sure why they had sex.

i see it as one of two ways. either it was angry sex or it was to establish domination of one over the other.

Nothing's better than a good ol' hatefuck... except perhaps the conversations that come about the morning after the hatefuck.

LOL! I would guess they didn't have any pillow talk afterwards. besides, they destroyed the conference room they were fight/fucking in and i'm curious which one or possibly both stayed behind to clean up the debris because they wrecked that room.

ciega
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I..... LOVE IT! the characters are messed up, but the story is superb. the fight/sex scene(?) reminds me of LOVE/DEATH.

Really reminds me of Black Lagoon characters - a bit too messed up

I hadn't thought about Black Lagoon because I added a Yuri filter when looking for comparisons, but I can see your point.

ch. 2 really cleared up a few things for me. I honestly thought the fight scene in ch. 1 was more along the lines of some weird spy-vs-spy knockdown, dragged out type of fight. with the flashbacks, it looks to have been some really some weird ass sadistic assert one's dominance fukc-fest instead. i suppose the one question is will each woman just try to assert their dominance over the other or will they fall in love with each other?

so not trying to get spoilers out of this, but the first two chapters are so extreme, another question I have is, how will the story keep the intensity up so high without becoming predictable and repetitive?

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ciega
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does this count as psycho yuri or crazy azz beeyotch yuri?

whatevah. bring on chapter 2!

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On a completely stupid side note, Kisaki-san suffers from a "tree" disease. That got me to wondering if she has to deal with termites or pesky critters that mistake her for a tree. if so, what does she do to deal with it?

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Aaaaaaaaaaaa the little flower omg

Is it me or is it every time Kisaki-san is happy and sprouts a flower, those flowers are getting bigger and changing shape?

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after reading this chapter, all I could think was "useless lesbians."

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ok so the pregnant sex was bcos they axed it huh

not really seeing that as the reason. even if the series hadn't been axed, i'd say eventually, there would have been a sex scene. plus i'd argue they'd just had a very tension-filled encounter with Tazune. once that tension was over, Midori felt she could freely to give herself to the person she loves. at least that's my take. would be interesting if this topic came up and was answered by Battan on pixiv or twitter.

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ciega
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i just love this couple.

after Shiho asked Akari if she loved her, I kind of thought Shiho would suggest they move in together especially after the pause in the conversation. it didn't happen. that's a shame, but hopefully their relationship progresses to that point and soon.

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soooo cute and yay! it's more than one chapter.

I was trying to think tree related puns too but my efforts were fruitless

I love and hate you both at the same time

but you have to admit that both comments will stick with you for the rest of the day.

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I see potential in this. It really deserves a sequel or full fledged series.

a sequel maybe, but I'm not sure a full fledged series would make an impact. Kamiura-san isn't trying to fall in love with Sasagawa, so it's not like there would be much of a story there other than them meeting up to have sex or their normal daily interactions, and that would get boring after a chapter or two.

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ciega
Cynical Dog discussion 05 Aug 01:09
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Excellent stuff, but needed more backstory of them.

yes! yes! and yes! if not a backstory then i'd love to have a continuation where the "puppy" either learns that her "dog" is a hit man or we find out that the "puppy" was sent to put the dog out of her misery.

ciega
SHY discussion 19 Jul 23:21
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ch44 should come with a warning not to drive like Pepesha.

ciega
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love the art and so far the story isn't sickly sweet. ok. i'm hooked.

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idk. this whole oneshot is beyond toxic. on one hand, it's interesting watching these two continue idiotically down their toxic path, but on the other hand, it leaves a slightly bitter taste as you watch the sadistic, selfish and manipulative behaviors of each girl. that said, i'd be great is there was a sequel to this oneshot.

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Why are people acting like this is the end of the story?

TBF, this story could end on this chapter and it wouldn't be a bad ending. plus it just kinda feels like an ending. makes you wonder if the last chapter will be a time skip than a chapter that wraps up all the loose ends.

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there seems to be a disconnect between chapters 1 and 2. Nozomi's recollection in chapter 1 is very different from that in chapter 2. i cannot tell if the two chapters are based on two different events or the same event that the authors reworked. i think it is going to take an additional chapter or two to make sense of the mismatch.

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I just finished ch. 145. my only reaction? NoOoOOOooooOOOOoooOOOOooooo!

the problem with binge reading is unless it's a complete series, once you come to the end of material, you're left with an empty void and bunch of whys? (why did it have to cut off right there?) at least until a metric ton of replacements forces you to forget about it and move one. then the vicious cycle starts all over.

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i'm kinda sad the second chp. was only 2 pages. hopefully as this little beaut continues, it gains a few more pages with each release.

ciega
Semelparous discussion 22 Apr 00:49
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man, oh man. first Shy, now Semelparous. this is a real treat. TBH, i don't care if this contains any yuri. the story so far is damn good. when we do get to the yuri parts, i kinda hope it's used to accent the main story instead of being the focus of the story.

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I think the name of the anthology is self explanatory

I hadn't paid attention that this and the other oneshots were part of an anthology or what the anthology's name was. thanks for pointing it out because before I had read your comment, I kept thinking what's with all the creepy, rapey shit that was being posted to the reader? now with all things considered... uuuum.

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April fools guys

it took me a couple of pages to realize this was an April Fool's Day spoof because maybe (and i was being generous) these two were oblivious that their "friendship" was really them dating.

BTW, is this a "real" oneshot that was appropriated for this AFD joke, and if so, when will the actual oneshot be posted, or is this the real deal and was translated as-is?