I'm liking the writing. It's just told more through expression and characterization than plot. My biggest complaint about the writing is simply that them being high schoolers doesn't really make sense for how they are characterized or drawn, this would make a lot more sense to me as college students or young adults.
Also that leg lock scene was perhaps the first time I've seen a scene focus on feet and it add to the feeling of the scene rather than detract from it, because her flexing toes added to the physicality of her squeezing her top in close.