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Japan, you should really look into your craft when it comes to sandals, they always snap in manga or cause injuries ... really impractical.

joined Sep 7, 2021

Oh come on.. can't you just add a few years anything to make it at least a bit believe.. The immersion is ruined but I'll still keep reading if it's funny. XD

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joined Apr 23, 2021

good stuff, big cute

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joined May 20, 2013

The public called her tall and beautiful

Entire public confirmed pedo

(I'm kidding)

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joined Oct 19, 2020

Man, this is so sweet and romantic and passionate and wholesome and lovely and beautiful and cute
One almost forgets that she's still in grade school

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When you realize the lost child is YOU!

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joined Dec 20, 2018

Mai-chan knows how to make a date really special. ^_^

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joined Oct 30, 2021

Mr.FBI im confused, do you have power here or not?

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joined Jul 19, 2018

Ten doesn't just push the boundaries of suspension of disbelief, it totally leaves them crushed underfoot and bleeding to death. If they had gone with 12, I could have hand-waved it away, since I myself was pretty close to my adult height by around age 13 but a ten-year-old just doesn't look like that no matter how early puberty hits. I was probably taller than this girl at age ten, but there is a big difference between being tall for your age and looking like an adult.

Other than the age being ridiculously pushed, its a pretty cute manga so far.

last edited at Oct 30, 2021 12:54PM

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joined Aug 29, 2019

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/be_careful_onee_san_serialization_ch05#22 welp, that's going to the phone wallpaper

That frame is something else indeed.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

Ten doesn't just push the boundaries of suspension of disbelief, it totally leaves them crushed underfoot and bleeding to death. If they had gone with 12, I could have hand-waved it away, since I myself was pretty close to my adult height by around age 13 but a ten-year-old just doesn't look like that no matter how early puberty hits. I was probably taller than this girl at age ten, but there is a big difference between being tall for your age and looking like an adult.

Other than the age being ridiculously pushed, its a pretty cute manga so far.

I think the author's note to I Wanna Spoil Yoroizuka-san! gives some insight into the difference between how readers parse stories for ethics and realism and how authors (especially comedy manga authors) view things:

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_wanna_spoil_yoroizuka_san_ch13#11

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_wanna_spoil_yoroizuka_san_ch13#12

It's pretty clear that many authors are like, "I like age-gap! So let's make a really big age gap! And maybe some yuri incest! Now I feel like drawing sex toys! Oooh, one of my favorite mangaka just had a cute cat-ear-girl yuri story--now I want to try a story with a loli cat-ear girl whose mom runs a sex-toy shop!" Etc.

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joined Jun 7, 2021

Japan, you should really look into your craft when it comes to sandals, they always snap in manga or cause injuries ... really impractical.

They are scientifically calculated to snap in the exact moment when it will cause the sandal wearer to fall into the arms of her romantic interest.

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It's pretty clear that many authors are like, "I like age-gap! So let's make a really big age gap! And maybe some yuri incest! Now I feel like drawing sex toys! Oooh, one of my favorite mangaka just had a cute cat-ear-girl yuri story--now I want to try a story with a loli cat-ear girl whose mom runs a sex-toy shop!" Etc.

And the world's a better place for that.

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It's pretty clear that many authors are like, "I like age-gap! So let's make a really big age gap! And maybe some yuri incest! Now I feel like drawing sex toys! Oooh, one of my favorite mangaka just had a cute cat-ear-girl yuri story--now I want to try a story with a loli cat-ear girl whose mom runs a sex-toy shop!" Etc.

And the world's a better place for that.

Reminds me of that one postscript by Kodama Naoko that went something like "this time I tried to draw the boobs really big, it was great" :P

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That announcement is an insult and a compliment at the same time.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

Japan, you should really look into your craft when it comes to sandals, they always snap in manga or cause injuries ... really impractical.

They are scientifically calculated to snap in the exact moment when it will cause the sandal wearer to fall into the arms of her romantic interest.

I like how this transforms the usual "You're really a soulmate if you come prepared with bandaids for when the geta chafe your partner at the fireworks festival" trope into an age-reversal piggyback.

And that piggyback > swing into hanabi was cuteness genius.

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joined Mar 20, 2017

Japan, you should really look into your craft when it comes to sandals, they always snap in manga or cause injuries ... really impractical.

Those things they sell for festival-only always breaks easily. It's business.

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joined Jan 5, 2015

Japan, you should really look into your craft when it comes to sandals, they always snap in manga or cause injuries ... really impractical.

It's so you can carry your girlfriend when her geta breaks. Of course, in this case, Mai-chan is just ... never mind.

Unlike Yuzumori-san, in this case I am rooting for them to have a romance. It's even more extreme than the "Two JKs Having Fun Together" manga. But her friend with Hitomi and the bodyguards is raising all sorts of red flags.

Going off with Mai-chan is the only way. No one would suspect.

The public called her tall and beautiful

Entire public confirmed pedo

(I'm kidding)

That's the only reason I ever went to festivals - to hit on all the 5'10" 10-year-olds with D-cups. They were everywhere!

last edited at Nov 8, 2021 6:34PM

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joined Oct 10, 2020

Next chapter will be done in a day or two

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joined Jun 25, 2021

The amount of people pressed about the suspension of disbelief is hilarious. I escape to manga to forget about reality. Yet people in comments are trying to tie manga to reality. Keyboard warriors meet my expectations every time ;-;

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joined Sep 27, 2017

Cute chapter, I hope the marriage aspect doesn't turn into too much drama or get drawn out.

Next chapter will be done in a day or two

Awesome news, thanks a ton!

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joined Sep 6, 2018

Dude, holy shit. That face.

some incredible hot girl sadist eyes. Honestly I’m just reading this story for how charismatic Mai-chan is and the incredible things the artist pulls off to make her look dark and seductive. It’s amazing.

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joined Oct 10, 2020

Cute chapter, I hope the marriage aspect doesn't turn into too much drama or get drawn out.

Next chapter will be done in a day or two

Awesome news, thanks a ton!

Sorry that was referring to chapter 6 lol, I just had more time today than I expected. Next weekend is my crazy one with 3 new chapters so idk when I'll be able to do chapter 7. As far as the marriage drama, it seems to be settled by the end of chapter 8, which is the end of volume one.

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joined Apr 23, 2021

oh no, marriage interview ark incoming

hyped for more

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