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joined Sep 27, 2017

Well that was rather strange, cute in a way I suppose? At least they seemed to move onto becoming individuals and stayed lovers. So I...think it ended well...?

Anyhow, thanks for the translation!

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joined Feb 28, 2015

By Aaangst I expected something more sad but thiis was surprisingly great thanks for the work!!

Eefgrstrsvw
joined Nov 15, 2016

this is surprisingly cute. Great work!!

Cool
joined Apr 4, 2021

That was strange and confusing but cute-

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

At first the concept was really weird and creepy, so I wasn't sure about continuing on, but I'm actually surprised by the direction they took it! It's nice to see them "grow up" and embrace their individuality, but also to see that they still do think the same in some ways. It was a very sweet end.

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joined Jun 27, 2014

This reminds me of the Maki-Maki duo from Virgins’ Empire, except more angsty and gay. Very nice.

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joined Sep 27, 2017

This reminds me of the Maki-Maki duo from Virgins’ Empire, except more angsty and gay. Very nice.

Still waiting on Maki-Maki to get married.

TheAlmightyUltimus
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joined Oct 30, 2018

They're learning to be themselves but keeping the other, the one they love, in their hearts... pretty nice ending imo

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joined May 24, 2017

Nice story and ending. Great oneshot indeed.

Mask
joined Jan 6, 2015

Twin angst, but without the incest. Nice concept! I'm glad they worked through it.

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joined Jul 21, 2013

The girls might have some twincest in their next life

Purple Library Guy
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joined Mar 3, 2013

This reminds me of the Maki-Maki duo from Virgins’ Empire, except more angsty and gay. Very nice.

Still waiting on Maki-Maki to get married.

Mahi-Mahi.

Abbysmug
joined May 15, 2020

ended better than I expected it to, I'm pleasantly surprised

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joined Jan 18, 2016

surprisingly wholesome

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joined Mar 1, 2018

I get it bit that made absolutely no sense at the end

Future Hokagae
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joined Sep 25, 2020

I thought they're twins, but I checked the tags lol. Nice and wholesome indeed :D

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joined Mar 4, 2018

If they simply worship our beneficent goddesses Mahi-Mahi they will have a wonderful life.

joined Jul 28, 2020

I feel like this had a better execution than the "twins struggling to be the same' yuri stories where they actually are, you know, twins.
Surprisingly great.

Palucina1
joined May 26, 2020

I'm glad that they didn't "do it." Having sex, when you're not ready (emotionally mature) never ends well. Now, they can get to know each other as individuals, and fall in love all over again.

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joined Dec 2, 2017

I was expecting more angst, but it ended well. Damn, i feel like this could be a very good series, but anyway.

Very nice overall, would pay for more.

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 21, "our hearts are the in the" -> "our hearts are in the"

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joined Jul 19, 2018

I'm glad they addressed this seriously. I've seen this extreme matching trend and always thought it felt toxic. They showed the necessity of autonomy and being yourself with the one you love perfectly, and how it's okay to share something without obsessing over similarities. The angst didn't feel too in your face and the end felt bittersweet but satisfying, even though all they did was smile; might've had to do with the build up.

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