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joined Feb 18, 2015

Well... the title doesn't lie!

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joined Mar 4, 2018

Well done, and now they don't just have to be connected through their hearts.

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joined Aug 19, 2015

Goodness. This is exactly the kind of mess I've been dreaming of reading after a long day. I love it.

Hotyangicon3
joined Jun 6, 2013
  • reads the body swap part * Fucking hell lol.

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Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

Imagine twins body swapping...

*mindblown*

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joined Apr 27, 2018

Holy shit... That was a lot!

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joined May 18, 2019

IM CRYING, A NEW PLOT POINT IS HAPPENING EVERY PANEL LIKE DUUUUUDERE

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joined Oct 15, 2016

Too many premises eh? Well, where is the love rival huh? Pretty dissapointed we didn't get that in there somehow. Needed at least two pages more.

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joined Jul 26, 2020

Classic Tamamusi

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joined Apr 27, 2014

I hope there's more of this and even more premises, this fast-paced rhythm is my thing.

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joined May 28, 2020

This is pure genius

joined Feb 1, 2021

Too many premises eh? Well, where is the love rival huh? Pretty dissapointed we didn't get that in there somehow. Needed at least two pages more.

Two pages is enough for what, five or six more premises?

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joined May 18, 2019

Dad: hi you're both sisters omg I'm sorry runs

Perfect, I love it

I kind of wish there was a manga that did something like this every arc, like one arc they would be able to read minds which then resolves itself, then another they swap bodies, one day a girl becomes too big/small, one grows cat ears, one becomes a vampire girl then later on it all jumbles together and then SURPRISE YOURE SISTERS

All with no explanation on why it's happening

Preety sure that's Kokoro Connect in a nutshell lmao

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joined Jun 13, 2012

W-wait!!! Hold on a moment, I can't catch up with the plot!

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joined Jun 13, 2012

Before reading: "Eh, why there's soooo many tags."

After reading: "Wow, I've just seen all of those tags in just 4 pages."

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joined Jun 25, 2017

It's always nice to see stuffs like this

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joined May 1, 2019

Hahahaha this is great, and I agree, it needs more premises!

joined Sep 14, 2015

I like how neither of them batted an eye over the fact that they're long-lost (half) sisters

Normally I'd be like "hey, it's not like they need to worry about having kids together", but with this many premises, who knows what could happen.

lmfao XD

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joined Aug 27, 2013

Wall of tags + 4 pages?

Works!

Bigj
joined Jul 7, 2021

Kino...

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joined Jan 11, 2018

it cant end like this

Marion Diabolito
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joined Jan 5, 2015

It's not too many premises for me. Good job.

We need to go deeper. Next have them hit by Truck-kun and end up in a medieval fantasy setting. After that put them in a yuri harem situation with a few other girls. And then finally have them form an idol unit... while also being magical girls.

you Ieft out the magic/science babies!

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Marion Diabolito
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joined Jan 5, 2015

What more premises does it need? So far:
1. They are childhood friends who meet up after a long parting who were in love with each other [Prism style]
2. Who turn out to be sisters, but prefer that [Met My Sister On a Dating Site style] and
3. Have telepathy if they touch someone [Mado no Mukougawa style] and also
4. swap bodies if they kiss [Swap <==> Swap style].

Kaiju Fan suggested:

  1. Isekaied into a fantasy game with yuri [I Favour the Villainess or My Next Life as a Villainess style],
  2. With a yuri harem [Yurika no Campus Life or MNLAAV style] and
  3. Form an idol unit [Love Live! style] and
  4. They are magical girls [Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha style]

And I suggested:

  1. magic/science babies [Saki or Iono the Fanatics style]

But, surely, even 9 premises is far too few.

What other tropes/cliches/premises does it need?

Internet_lied
joined Jul 15, 2016

What other tropes/cliches/premises does it need?

It's not made obvious, but there are at least three more premises hidden on the first page: Ryou is a high school girl (School life), Yuna may be an Office lady, which would give us Age gap for free.

More premises that are missing:

  • Ryou's family turns out be rich (Ojou-sama) and Yuna starts moonlighting as her Maid.
  • Ryou "accidentally" books Yuna on a lesbian prostitute service (Pay for gay).
  • Flashback of when Yuna was a Gyaru in high-school, while Ryou led a Delinquent gang.
  • Ryou is actually an Assassin sent to kill Yuna, and vice versa.

What else did I miss?

Marion Diabolito
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joined Jan 5, 2015

What else did I miss?

^Those are wonderful - maybe the sisters sharing sensations like in Sharing Maid-san ?

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