This is definitely the hottest thing I've read in the last month, absolutely for sure. The domination loss, the "bullies long to be bullied" line (haahh, holy shit!) coupled with the initiator getting absolutely flattened in a way she didn't predict... and, well, of course the sex was good, too.
I think it would have lost a lot from being roleplay. There's something about the twisted, raw feelings spilling over with no moral guidance or boundaries (in a fantasy scenario of fiction, of course) that really adds to the kinkiness, the sort of dark spice that I really enjoy in, say, Sal Jiang's work. Between faces like the [snap] one on the top of page six, and the selfish, unrestrained hedonism of using the real cheating context as a way to lend a charge to your sex ("I want you to kiss your girlfriend with the same mouth you used to lick another woman's pussy" is both fucked up and very nice), it adds a sweet stickiness to the encounter that we don't get to see very often.
It may not be your cup of tea--but it's certainly mine. And I say it has just the right amount of bitterness to be really tasty.
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