If only I had someone to kick my self-doubt in the pants like that. Well, other than my parents I guess.

well OK?

meh, that kinda sucked ?

Ended just a couple pages too early.

Love this author, always excited to see her name on a new release. Page 123 got my heart thumping a little. I didn't expect her to say that, it really made me feel the weight of her inadequacy. Just too short. It built a nice thing & then just ended without really resolving it.

It is missing something

Depressing. But hopeful. I feel it.

Makes me want to better myself for the new year. We shall see

Nice. Wish it was a series. Could be real interesting.

I enjoy the idea of 'real friends are the ones that stick with you before you are popular and have something to give', for some reason it just hit me in the right spot. Short, but enjoyable.

Cute story... I like all the details included in the artwork to convey emotions/reactions by the characters. My favorite one is the pen drop when MC confessed to her girl friend. My second favorite is the cashier’s expression—dull cow eyes comes to mind.

The artist has talent... please develop a longer story than a one shot.

Kinda oof ending.

wait what's the "defeat"? is it that Shiratori convinced Tora that she is enough because she still loves her above all the others that confessed to her?

wait what's the "defeat"? is it that Shiratori convinced Tora that she is enough because she still loves her above all the others that confessed to her?

I'm lost as well

Neet girl just has self doubts about herself so she tries to say she wants to breakup bc the other girl does everything. Except she doesn't care about anyone because they're all superficial and only care about her looks. So she feels like she prefers the person who's stuck by her even before she was beautiful.

Ok ok but homura in a suit nose bleed

Ok ok but homura in a suit nose bleed

It's all about Mami in a suit

Always excited for new Imura Ei stuff, but this one ends a tad too early to be completely satisfying.

wait what's the "defeat"? is it that Shiratori convinced Tora that she is enough because she still loves her above all the others that confessed to her?

I'm lost as well

I thought it was clear.

Tora made a courageous decision to break up with her gf.

She made that decision because she realized there was an abyss between them in terms of success, competence, accomplishments, etc. (The other girl is a winner at everything, while Tora panics even at the idea of going to a konbini to shop for groceries.)

However, when she courageously told Shiratori that she was better off without the dead weight that Tora was and that they should break up, Shiratori refused and explained (in a typically Japanese indirect way, more implying than saying) that she loved and needed Tora.

Thus Tora's attempt at "being brave" and "doing the right thing" was soundly defeated.

Why so many promising stories are one shots? Not a big fan of the art though.

Would love a sequel from Shiratori's point of view.

cute, but very short

Wait, thats it..? We need a sequel or something.

Altair posted:

Ok ok but homura in a suit nose bleed

It's all about Mami in a suit

The only good Mami is a headless one.

I liked it as it was