The end...
It was a good story. Would have loved to see more. I wanted to see Haruhi and Yukari interact that first night back in bed together, honeymoon 2. Wanted to see the family win the competition. Would have been so interesting to see the "children" interact with 'dad', especially Usagi who was so young and shy, but spoke up to Haruhi went it mattered. Wanted to see Haruhi win the final challenge thrown at her by the President, the tears of joy as Yukari was now free to be with the one she loved. It would have been great.
But this ending was good too...