Nice to see it updated. Kinda disappointing it has the cliche health issue
lol, they met in a hospital. her health has been a shown fact since the beginning, and not some half thrown in for drama let's suddenly make her sick thing a lot of authors do. it feels more real and better written if it's something the story starts with, and already has established and worked out in the author's head. at least imo it does. we might not know exactly what's wrong but...they met...IN A HOSPITAL lol so you know something is there. and now with su's dad being familiar with her, shows it's not something new. you can't exactly call it a simple cliche if it's part of the story setting/character bios from the get go. well, i guess you can. you can call it whatever you want. what is and isn't cliche is different for each individual person. i myself haven't read enough of that kind of setting for a story for it to be cliche though. that's my 2 cents anyways.
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