woah a Yotsuba doujinshi
It's really nicely drawn, hmm I like Torako and Asagi

last edited at Sep 3, 2016 9:45PM

pshhh tomboys aren't "yaoi." girls are still girls even if they're slightly more masculine

This was really nice.

I have to admit I used to be of the "if they're too masculine they're basically dudes," and now I'm extremely embarrassed and ashamed that I ever subscribed to that line of logic.

last edited at Sep 3, 2016 9:51PM

aaaaaaa teasing! good good very nice

Torako and Asagi is one of my fav pairings so I'm happy to see this!

This was really good. Both in story and character portrayal.

On the one hand, it's rare TorakoxAsagi. On the other hand, Asagi is being kind of whimsically cruel. I'm torn.

e: but the art and execution are really top notch.

last edited at Sep 4, 2016 5:28AM

Asagi is being kind of whimsically cruel.

In other words, she's in-character.

That's it?

Citing a certain pasta:

Asagi is that wonderful kind of bisexual, who are all cool and "equal opportunity lovers", thus lending themselves for some girl/girl action without actually offending societal norms, as such non-monogamous lifestyle usually ends in unexpected pregnancy and marriage. And girls can't "unexpectedly" make girls pregnant.
In other words, they continue to "fly from flower to flower" until something stops them. And male partners have many more things to do it, like societally approved institutions and natural child conception. Female partners can't offer them stability and social status they'll inevitably desire someday.

Pacing was good. It was a good read, it had this... unique atmosphere to it, but I can't really describe it. It felt nice

Great art, but I somehow don't see the yuri.
And if any, it seems like an unrequited love. Aaaangst would fit here.

Great art, but I somehow don't see the yuri.
And if any, it seems like an unrequited love. Aaaangst would fit here.

If unrequited doesn't qualify, we need to un-tag half of yuri here.

Also, it feelt like Asagi wanted to push it forward in the end.

Great art, but I somehow don't see the yuri.
And if any, it seems like an unrequited love. Aaaangst would fit here.

If unrequited doesn't qualify, we need to un-tag half of yuri here.

Also, it feelt like Asagi wanted to push it forward in the end.

No, I meant that if there is any yuri, it is an unrequited love one, and because of this, it deserves the angst.
Didn't get that feeling from Asagi.

for what it's worth, i read the ending as torako finally caving and telling asagi what she really wants from their relationship and asagi accepting it from her

holyyyy fuck i am in such dire need of asagi/torako and this is really nice. i love it when relationships hover on the edge of friendship and romance and this has such a nice, cleansing feeling. yotsubato is my favorite manga and i LIVE for fanworks of it

I have loved yotsuba&! since 2008 so I'm really glad to see more tora x asagi stuff.

What a nice artstyle. It's simple but there's something charming about it.

Pacing was good. It was a good read, it had this... unique atmosphere to it, but I can't really describe it. It felt nice

i agree, there's something about the atmosphere. it has this sort of vague feeling to it. a little sad, a little distant.

this story was really good, it's one of the first stories I read on this yuri website who's name I can't remember which led me to here