Well that was a cheerful start to my day.

Not fair... "Oooh, you feel bad for the girl in the first part? :( ... Too bad! Here part 2, add some salt in that wound >:V fuk u!" my heart is broken, so the goal of this doujin was achieved

Way to twist the knife...

Ah. Well done. Nice little addition. Glad this exists. It's just a bump in the road mc! You will find someone great.

Well that's unpleasant. It really grates on me when "cute" is elongated with extra e's instead of u's. . .

Goddammit! Why?!

A sequel to a story with one of the saddest endings, in yuri? It's only 4 pages long and only adds a little more painful moments? Great! I love feeling dead inside! (0_0)

I was panicking because I wasn't on hand to post a link to the first story as the first comment. Guess which superhero had already done precisely this.

Please, I make Aquaman look competent. I'll try to make first post for sequel's the original from now on though.

BTW, is it okay to upload the alternate translation of the Kazuma Kowo manga? It looked like you were fine with dropping it after the other scanlation came out, but I figure it's worth asking before adding it.

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I can relate so much to the MC. OMG.
But I still wanted something happier as a sequel

Well that was just mean (the author that is)

That's more like an epilogue than a sequel.

A sequel to a story with one of the saddest endings, in yuri?

Aren't you overreacting a little bit? Everyone's still alive, they're still teenagers and there's plenty of time for MC to fall in love with (and date) other girls...

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Oh wow the mangaka's art has improved a lot since the prequel / previous chapter of this series.

niwa:

Well that's unpleasant. It really grates on me when "cute" is elongated with extra e's instead of u's. . .

Why? It's the 'e' at the end that lengthens the 'u' vowel. Adding more 'e's would naturally lengthen it further.

drpepperfan:

BTW, is it okay to upload the alternate translation of the Kazuma Kowo manga?

Sure. Did you want me to ask the scanlator about making a couple minor corrections if it's to be the final version?

diav:

Oh wow the mangaka's art has improved a lot since the prequel / previous chapter of this series.

This was actually released in November 2011, just a couple months after the original. But given how much it differs stylistically from all her other work, it's possible Ohsawa actually drew Dusk, Orange when she was much younger and just never managed to find a publisher.

drpepperfan:

BTW, is it okay to upload the alternate translation of the Kazuma Kowo manga?

Sure. Did you want me to ask the scanlator about making a couple minor corrections if it's to be the final version?

It's okay, may as well upload it as it is for the time being. If they do the corrections, I can just update it with the new versions, but I'd like to get it on the site first. It's pretty highly requested lol

diav:

Oh wow the mangaka's art has improved a lot since the prequel / previous chapter of this series.

This was actually released in November 2011, just a couple months after the original. But given how much it differs stylistically from all her other work, it's possible Ohsawa actually drew Dusk, Orange when she was much younger and just never managed to find a publisher.

Oh, that would make sense. Anyway it's a nice development. Hoping to see more of her work translated! :)

Ice Bear does not approve of this sequel

That credit page shows my feels exactly ;w;

That credit page is too accurate, it hurts!

fuck this, the original one was angst enough, and Yayoi just had to make this one and include the couple. this is sad :(

Fuck, man.

What is with aaangst these days man?
Even worse is them stories where a girl can't get to who she loves, so she goes with some senpai etc. instead.
Man... ... Dude. To heavy.

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Not fair... "Oooh, you feel bad for the girl in the first part? :( ... Too bad! Here part 2, add some salt in that wound
:V fuk u!"

Yeah and a short part 2, making it much moreso.

I wish i'd never read this. My heart will never stop hurting.

i rather liked this lol. more often then not, when you find someone you like, they tend to already be in a relationship. at least from my own experiences lol. so yes, while lack of lovin for the mc is sad, can't we all rejoice the fact that this lesbian girl who was being ostracized at school had some happiness in her life outside of it? none of that oh poor tortured soul getting saved by their nice/curious classmate spiel we see so often?

Omg did I seriously have to relive that whole story just for this quick hard fuq you in the face T-T this better get another damn sequel with a happy ending. I demand it.

So the sequel to that already painful story that I loved so much is even MORE painful? With a "haha guys the mc still loves that girl, but she's still in a happy relationship, sucks to be the mc!"

Yeah, pff, why on earth would I want her to have a happy ending in any possible sequel, thats just ridiculous!