i didn't read all the comments, but, am i the only one who see some (/a lot of) similarities with octave?
however, octave with a likeable MC is good news.
Urrrgh, don't remind me of Yukino. I'm unable to ever reread Octave again cause of her fucking one night stand. Always breaks my heart. And, even worse, Setsuko's heart. :/
As many said, the dialogue/monologue in this manga does flow kinda weird but I guess that could be because the author kinda rushes into the relationship. It's like ten pages for introducing two characters and the setting, as well as having a more or less believable first meeting between them that also has to give a glimbse into their future relationship. Maybe it's gonna get better when the author gets to space out the story a little more.
Anyways, I'm all for yuri with already established couples, so let the flirting begin.