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joined Nov 15, 2017

If only I had someone to kick my self-doubt in the pants like that. Well, other than my parents I guess.

Don't%20forget%20the%20best%20girl
joined Jul 22, 2018

well OK?

joined Sep 17, 2019

meh, that kinda sucked ?

RumpledForeSkiin
151
joined Jun 27, 2016

Ended just a couple pages too early.

Dynav
joined Aug 6, 2013

Love this author, always excited to see her name on a new release. Page 123 got my heart thumping a little. I didn't expect her to say that, it really made me feel the weight of her inadequacy. Just too short. It built a nice thing & then just ended without really resolving it.

Ke%20(5)
joined Feb 10, 2016

It is missing something

Smallerpfp
joined Nov 26, 2019

Depressing. But hopeful. I feel it.

Images
joined Aug 19, 2018

Makes me want to better myself for the new year. We shall see

Your_hair_has_gotten_longer_by_folksneedheroes-d5l5v69
joined Apr 23, 2015

Nice. Wish it was a series. Could be real interesting.

joined Jul 4, 2018

I enjoy the idea of 'real friends are the ones that stick with you before you are popular and have something to give', for some reason it just hit me in the right spot. Short, but enjoyable.

joined Sep 6, 2018

Cute story... I like all the details included in the artwork to convey emotions/reactions by the characters. My favorite one is the pen drop when MC confessed to her girl friend. My second favorite is the cashier’s expression—dull cow eyes comes to mind.

The artist has talent... please develop a longer story than a one shot.

Pikachuwhat
joined Mar 13, 2014

Kinda oof ending.

DR2 Hajime Hinata
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joined Jul 20, 2016

wait what's the "defeat"? is it that Shiratori convinced Tora that she is enough because she still loves her above all the others that confessed to her?

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joined Oct 6, 2018

wait what's the "defeat"? is it that Shiratori convinced Tora that she is enough because she still loves her above all the others that confessed to her?

I'm lost as well

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joined Jan 30, 2013

Neet girl just has self doubts about herself so she tries to say she wants to breakup bc the other girl does everything. Except she doesn't care about anyone because they're all superficial and only care about her looks. So she feels like she prefers the person who's stuck by her even before she was beautiful.

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joined Aug 26, 2018

Ok ok but homura in a suit nose bleed

Altair Uploader
Reisen%20ds
joined Nov 30, 2016

Ok ok but homura in a suit nose bleed

It's all about Mami in a suit

Smk_compress
joined Jan 16, 2017

Always excited for new Imura Ei stuff, but this one ends a tad too early to be completely satisfying.

Utenaanthy01
joined Aug 4, 2018

wait what's the "defeat"? is it that Shiratori convinced Tora that she is enough because she still loves her above all the others that confessed to her?

I'm lost as well

I thought it was clear.

Tora made a courageous decision to break up with her gf.

She made that decision because she realized there was an abyss between them in terms of success, competence, accomplishments, etc. (The other girl is a winner at everything, while Tora panics even at the idea of going to a konbini to shop for groceries.)

However, when she courageously told Shiratori that she was better off without the dead weight that Tora was and that they should break up, Shiratori refused and explained (in a typically Japanese indirect way, more implying than saying) that she loved and needed Tora.

Thus Tora's attempt at "being brave" and "doing the right thing" was soundly defeated.

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joined Dec 9, 2014

Why so many promising stories are one shots? Not a big fan of the art though.

Aoi%20nagisa%20-%20s
joined Aug 17, 2012

Would love a sequel from Shiratori's point of view.

Download
joined Jun 4, 2015

cute, but very short

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joined Jul 12, 2012

Wait, thats it..? We need a sequel or something.

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Dynasty_misc015
joined Nov 7, 2014

Altair posted:

Ok ok but homura in a suit nose bleed

It's all about Mami in a suit

The only good Mami is a headless one.

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joined Feb 12, 2016

I liked it as it was

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