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Yuibless
joined Jan 30, 2017

Someone's catching feelings...

Pout2
joined Mar 7, 2017

Man, this would make a killer anime, It has witch from mercury vibes, minus the insane mental conditioning

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joined Jun 21, 2021

Man, this would make a killer anime, It has witch from mercury vibes, minus the insane mental conditioning

The mental conditioning comes in the form of the patriarchy and heteronormativity xD

Eterna%20rinebow%20small
joined Oct 20, 2017

They deserve to celebrate not losing the boat (for now). To relax and maybe flirt a little, you know

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joined Apr 5, 2023

They deserve to celebrate not losing the boat (for now). To relax and maybe flirt a little, you know

And above all, they need a place where both can shower because Diode stinks.

Man, this would make a killer anime, It has witch from mercury vibes, minus the insane mental conditioning

The mental conditioning comes in the form of the patriarchy and heteronormativity xD

Yes, it's worse than what we're seeing :3

The following is only present in the novel (first volume, part 4, so for any possible future readers: This is not a huge spoiler but rather a minor thing about Diode herself), in the same scene I mentioned to have been considerably reduced in the manga (chapter 5) Diode tells this to Terra, but I'll be spoiling it just in case it happens to be brought up later in the manga. I don't consider it a major detail, so I think it should be safe for anyone to read if they want to know a little more about the setting!
Diode while trying to flee from her clan did end up getting in trouble with 2 other different clans, one, I think it's supposed to be called "Trays", tried to arrest her because they suspected that she had falsified somehow her hours spent on a ship and she had quite the trouble proving that she didn't falsify it
The other, the Pollux, got her into a health program that aims to improve and watch the health of young girls so that they have better results when it comes to reproduction. They are kept under surveillance for the entire day and have their calories controlled and their bodies tested for any illnesses and such until they are seen fit for breeding. In the words of Diode, "it seems that the Pollux have a great interest in reproduction"

For anyone that's interested, here's the raw text for the scene in question:
「トレイズ氏では、詐欺の容疑で逮捕されかけました。ポルックス氏では、瘦身障害の診断を出されて、奨妊プログラムに加入させられるところでした」
「逮捕!?」衝撃的な言葉と、もっと衝撃的な言葉に、テラは椅子から飛び上がる。「と、瘦身? プログラム? それってなんですか?」
「詐欺のほうは航行時間詐称を疑われたんです。九五〇〇時間は多すぎるって。濡れ衣を晴らすのに苦労しました」ダイオードは苦い顔で話す。「あとのほうのやつは、若い女を二四時間監視下において、健康を維持できる上限までカロリーを取らせて、子供を産みやすい体形に仕上げようっていう公的計画です。ポルックス氏は、とにかく生物を繁殖させるのが大好きらしくて」
(…) Cutting this part because it's Terra saying something about foie gras and Diode not understanding it
「私の体形、病気だって判定されたんですよ。そもそも測ってくれなんて頼んでもいないのに」
「だ、大丈夫だったんですか? その、奨妊……」

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(Spoilers regarding the Gendo clan) In the third volume of the novel, they bring up how they have their ability to or not to reproduce heavily controlled, with Diode's clan, the Gendo, being even worse at it. While the Endeavour allow the use of contraceptives to control one's menstruation, the Gendo outright banned those and the people there ended up developing their own black market of contraceptives — and yes, hysterectomies aren't exactly allowed in either and I think it's safe to assume it's the same in other clans when the population number is a concern for all of them.
So, quite similar to our own world.

...And let's not forget that Diode is being pursued.

Palucina1
joined May 26, 2020

So, girls in this world are not only fish finder radars, but baby factories, as well. PROGRESS! (I know it's more complicated than that, but you get the idea.) I just want my weird sci-fi Yuri!!!!

Hogfather
Kouyuri
joined Jan 25, 2016

Oh WOW this manga is a delight to read! At first it didn’t look that interesting, but I gave it a chance and now it’s one of my favorites! I’m hoping for some quality yuri love but for now the story is exciting and fantastic!

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joined Apr 5, 2023

So, I have decided that I'm going to try and translate the novel's first volume and was wondering if anyone knows what would be the best way to share it, like any websites? Or hosts... For now I set up a neocities for when I get it started but it's not like I know enough HTML to make it pleasant to the eyes (I'll try to continue past the basics if I must), nor if they'll take it down because it happens to be against their rules or something.

I can't guarantee that it'll be that good of a translation because I'm not a native english speaker, a beginner when it comes to japanese, never really translated anything this big before and will be doing this all by myself... I also don't really read english books so it'll probably sound weird, but I'm reaching my limit, I want other individuals to enjoy this work, too.
I can at least promise that I'll do my best.

I’m hoping for some quality yuri love

We'll get some, don't worry :D

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joined Apr 5, 2023

I do know enough to play stuff like Dai Gyakuten Saiban, read Urasekai Picnic, Twinstar (Which is quite complex compared to the other things I've read in my opinion), other yuri novels and manga with no issues so it's not going to be that bad

My friend is going to help me with it, when we make progress I'll share it here ^^

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Eterna%20rinebow%20small
joined Oct 20, 2017

So, I have decided that I'm going to try and translate the novel's first volume and was wondering if anyone knows what would be the best way to share it, like any websites?

That is really kind of you to offer!

I have seen groups posting chapters as blog posts on Wordpress, e.g. Amawashi. Another option is to upload document files (e.g. docx, epub, html) to Google Drive or Mega.nz, and host the links somewhere (e.g. Wordpress, Carrd), which is how the most popular translation project of JWQS (Chinese yuri webnovel) is shared. I have also seen some novels posted here on DynastyScans in the form of image sets, and then the translator would post links to document files in the forum thread, e.g. Sneikkimies' version of the Adachi and Shimamura light novels.

I think since TCR is a published light novel that one would normally pay to read (i.e. it's not a free-to-read web novel) it might be better to not use a blogging site for anything other than posting links to files uploaded somewhere else. But this is just my observation, so maybe you could ask around some of the groups about best practices. Some people in the Dynasty Discord server might also be able to help connect you to a translator who has worked on novels before.

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%e3%83%8e%e3%83%ab%e3%83%8b%e3%82%ab
joined Apr 5, 2023

So, I have decided that I'm going to try and translate the novel's first volume and was wondering if anyone knows what would be the best way to share it, like any websites?

That is really kind of you to offer!

I have seen groups posting chapters as blog posts on Wordpress, e.g. Amawashi. Another option is to upload document files (e.g. docx, epub, html) to Google Drive or Mega.nz, and host the links somewhere (e.g. Wordpress, Carrd), which is how the most popular translation project of JWQS (Chinese yuri webnovel) is shared. I have also seen some novels posted here on DynastyScans in the form of image sets, and then the translator would post links to document files in the forum thread, e.g. Sneikkimies' version of the Adachi and Shimamura light novels.

I think since TCR is a published light novel that one would normally pay to read (i.e. it's not a free-to-read web novel) it might be better to not use a blogging site for anything other than posting links to files uploaded somewhere else. But this is just my observation, so maybe you could ask around some of the groups about best practices. Some people in the Dynasty Discord server might also be able to help connect you to a translator who has worked on novels before.

Thank you very much for your advice! Once I get past my discord aversion I'll definitely join the dynasty server

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joined Apr 5, 2023

I think that this page way back on chapter 1 has a small mistranslation, Terra isn't saying that the besshu are in "the backs of four female spot-billed ducks" but that they were "on the back of the fourth (female) duckling"

カルガモの四女の背中

Maybe "On the back of the fourth spot-billed duck daughter!" or something like that would sound better, because I feel how I phrased it before is quite misleading. I forgot to change my post, sorry about that!

last edited at Oct 20, 2024 2:13AM

Bibivolversmall
joined Oct 6, 2023

I'm really loving this so far, can't wait to see more!

kinseijoshi Uploader
Suimasen Scans
joined Feb 8, 2024

I really liked this chapter, excellent combo of cohabitation and lore dump. The visual gag of "Diode is literally a stray cat" at the bottom of page 9 was wonderful. The next chapter is scheduled for release on November 15. The volume 2 tankobon is also scheduled for release on December 6, so if you've got a bit of money to kick towards supporting the serialization, please do!

I think that this page way back on chapter 1 has a small mistranslation, Terra isn't saying that the besshu are in "the backs of four female spot-billed ducks" but that they were "on the back of the fourth (female) duckling"

カルガモの四女の背中

Thanks! I've updated the chapter.

last edited at Oct 19, 2024 11:22PM

Old%20man%20prof
joined Oct 25, 2022

I loved this chapter, and have been waiting for something like it ever since the series started. The setting for this is so unique and cool, but it really dove right into the action immediately, and this is the first time it's really let up. I'm hoping this slowdown continues for a bit more, so we get more cool lore like we got this chapter, and also further development of the two leads.

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joined Apr 5, 2023

Yay, it's here! The chapter where Diode goes full cat mode! Tanaka Ahiru's done, in my opinion, a great job of showing her slowly warming up to Terra (And there's something else I'd love to comment about but it's something that happens much later into the novel so I can't T_T) but also just how friendly Terra is, respecting her space and all. I don't know, there's just something so filled with love in this chapter.

I'd also like to add that they do have official heights in the manga! 143cm for Diode and 184cm for Terra

I'll be sharing the novel's prologue soon (but be aware that it'll give some background you wouldn't otherwise get from the manga at this point on Eda and Magiri) because its translation is pretty much done and I just need a second person's opinion on how much sense it makes. It's been going very slowly because I'm often too tired to do anything, but I've been making progress and I'm just excited to allow more people to enjoy this work! I love it so much.
The formatting is nowhere near "final" but the text itself should be fine and I'd appreciate some feedback if possible anyway.

last edited at Oct 20, 2024 7:12AM

Yuibless
joined Jan 30, 2017

G-G-Girls can m-marry other g-girls!? WHAT?

joined Jun 11, 2021

This chapter was so good and really hooked me into this series more than anything else. I love the world building and slow introduction of lesbians to Terra. And the way Diode is literally a cat, staying hidden away at first and slowly opening up and expanding her "territory", so fucking cute. I hope this series goes on for a while because it has so much potential and is a joy to read.

ArtemisOnVtubers
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joined Dec 16, 2021

Oh course, in the future should be obligatory

Prettygirlsmall
joined Jul 4, 2021

Thank you so much for translating this series! It has very quickly become one of my favorites, and one that makes my day when I see there's a new chapter out. It has this...refreshingly retro sci-fi feel, like a really creative paperback from the mid 1900's. Where the sci-fi setting starts from a simple premise (gas giant settlers, clay that can be molded by thought) and is allowed to just get really weird. The planet is as much a main character as Diode and Terra, and that's neat!

Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

This reminds me of old 80's and 90's sci-fi anime in the best way. And the relationship between the leads is super sweet so far!

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joined Apr 5, 2023

Honestly I'm still a bit anxious about this, but the prologue and ch 1 of the novel are in an acceptable state, and you can currently read them here
(Kinseijoshi's compiling them on a .pdf as we get them done)

Huge, huge thanks to Kinseijoshi for helping me with this, while I'm responsible for the translation, she edited and greatly helped me with grammar and to make it fluid and natural sounding. The sentences are only to this level thanks to her.
I'm really grateful for it!

It's been going slowly, but we're getting there. She's currently editing ch 2 and I'm making progress on ch 3 (There are a total of 11 chapters). It takes a while because I don't have much energy for anything, but I promise it'll get done!
There may be some minor translation mistakes, but those should get fixed as soon as I notice them.

last edited at Nov 9, 2024 3:03AM

kinseijoshi Uploader
Suimasen Scans
joined Feb 8, 2024

Bummer, no chapter this month - the next release date was punted until 12/20.

If you're having fishing yuri withdrawals, definitely be sure to check out the novel translation girlswhokiss is putting together! IMO the yuri aspects land even harder in the narration. We just posted chapter 2 this evening.

Terra
joined Nov 13, 2024

Bummer, no chapter this month - the next release date was punted until 12/20.

If you're having fishing yuri withdrawals, definitely be sure to check out the novel translation girlswhokiss is putting together! IMO the yuri aspects land even harder in the narration. We just posted chapter 2 this evening.

Thanks to both of you for the novel translations! The prologue's added so much more to the story as it is, and in general it feels like the worldbuilding is much less rushed than the manga adaptation was able to do.

So I'm going to be very happy to keep reading it as you update the novels alongside this.

last edited at Nov 16, 2024 6:38AM

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