But still, it's impressive that you found as many as you did, not gonna lie.
cracks knuckles
Pg 6 -- overlook the first floor -- overlooked
Pg 7 -- the two us -- the two of us
Wouldn't have thought that -- "Wouldn't have thought that",
Yeah yeah, she smirked back. -- "Yeah yeah", she smirked back.
Pg 8 - calm, or rather, quiet. -- calm; or rather, quiet.
Pg 9 -- get deceived -- be deceived
wearing since I was going to get sweaty anyway, -- wearing, since I was going to get sweaty anyway,
Pg 10 - missing the the table -- missing the table
Pg 11 - hadn't always been skipping -- hadn't always skipped
or something, as well as -- or something; as well as
Pg 12- and as we went -- and when we went
sleeves, now sticking to my arms with sweat, and -- sleeves--now sticking to my arms with sweat--and /
sleeves, that were now sticking to my arms with sweat, and
Pg 13 - "... wind." Adachi muttered -- "... wind", Adachi muttered,
Pg 14 - the one go do -- the one to go do
Pg 16 - alone, and -- alone; and
I could keep going with nitpicks on things like word tenses and passive voice, but it would make me look like more of a dick, when I'm not trying to be a dick. ("Weird flex, but okay", lol)
Never, ever, underestimate the ability of a retired 40 year old book nerd with far too much time on her hands.
That said, again, I'm enjoying the fact that there have been a couple light novels translated and uploaded here. I respect all the hard work put into translating and formatting page after page of text very much.
