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joined May 1, 2018

Inb4 all the "reAdiNG???? oN a mANGa weBsiTe???? RRREEEEEEEE E EEEEE EE EEEE EE E EEEE EEEE E EE"

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joined May 1, 2018

Wait a second I recognize this setup and characters... oh, it's that manga!

joined Jan 31, 2018

reAdiNG???? oN a mANGa weBsiTe???? RRREEEEEEEE E EEEEE EE EEEE EE E EEEE EEEE E E

Fennec
joined May 28, 2012

Already bought this one, but haven't read it yet.

Image
joined Mar 16, 2013

Heck yeah, man! More light novels!!

The%20scientist%20edit
joined Mar 9, 2013

Why is both the manga and the book here? Not that I mind, but seeing them both be concurrently translated is an interesting development.

Thevoid
joined Nov 13, 2015

Pdf/Epub:
https://mega.nz/#F!JoVBRIgJ!80VybFiaAC0ckl0bsCer9g
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1kkRuQ5SD7shbtQpXItdyS-ZeUKKuU47_

Next chapter next month

Lemme know if you want some help with QC. I've been interested in this series for several months now, so I wouldn't mind putting in the time. Plus, me being my grammar Nazi self, I have been noticing a few errors as I've been reading this chapter. Nothing super egregious, but enough I thought I may as well offer to help out.

joined May 9, 2018

I'm really enjoying the manga, and the more LN that we got the better, I really love it, so Thanks for bringing it to the site \o/

last edited at Mar 21, 2019 1:16AM

joined Sep 6, 2018

Ok, a plain story like this can be bought from the YA section of book stores. I consider this a rough draft of a manga. Please find an artist willing to draw out the scenes in your story. Make your story special by graphically portraying the story in manga form.

I was curious to see the difference between the last LN and this one. Wow, night and day. I prefer the previous one over this one.

joined Jan 5, 2018

bloodly light novel shit

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joined Mar 13, 2014

This is nice, but where are the pictures!!!!111ELEVEN

shadesofgreymoon
Swxj4ro
joined Jun 5, 2016

Pdf/Epub:
https://mega.nz/#F!JoVBRIgJ!80VybFiaAC0ckl0bsCer9g
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1kkRuQ5SD7shbtQpXItdyS-ZeUKKuU47_

Next chapter next month

Lemme know if you want some help with QC. I've been interested in this series for several months now, so I wouldn't mind putting in the time. Plus, me being my grammar Nazi self, I have been noticing a few errors as I've been reading this chapter. Nothing super egregious, but enough I thought I may as well offer to help out.

I offered the same thing, heh, but figured they must have enough help.

Also, (apparently) obligatory "REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE iT's NoT a MaNgA i DoN't WaNnA rEaD WoRdS REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" ^_~

Yandere%20=%20423182%20-%20copy
joined Nov 29, 2013

Pdf/Epub:
https://mega.nz/#F!JoVBRIgJ!80VybFiaAC0ckl0bsCer9g
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1kkRuQ5SD7shbtQpXItdyS-ZeUKKuU47_

Next chapter next month

Lemme know if you want some help with QC. I've been interested in this series for several months now, so I wouldn't mind putting in the time. Plus, me being my grammar Nazi self, I have been noticing a few errors as I've been reading this chapter. Nothing super egregious, but enough I thought I may as well offer to help out.

I am not in the team but I do curious what grammar mistakes you've found in the book. (Just wanna be better at grammar)

Heavy%20cruiser%20160
joined Apr 27, 2013

It's alright? Kinda bland, but at least doesn't feel as empty as the manga adaptation

20180327_165604
joined Nov 9, 2017

REEEEEEE

Nishiki%20gosu%20rori%20dark%20hair%20sm
joined Jan 11, 2015

One of my favourite novel series finally getting some love! :D
Can't wait for the queen of weirdness, Yashiro, to show up!

joined Mar 21, 2019

Adachi and shimamura(Manga) is from this Novel
(sorry for my bad englis)

last edited at Mar 21, 2019 11:37AM

847
joined May 28, 2011

pg 07, "the two us" -> the two of us
pg 14, "chosen as the one go" -> as the one to go
pg 32, "that would make a weirdo too." -> that would make (her? me?) a weirdo too.
pg 34, "didn't know about about us two" -> didn't know about us two
pg 40, "she didn't have have her phone" -> she didn't have her phone
pg 43, "the shoe rack was where were separated." -> the shoe rack was where we were separated.
pg 45, "we really did leave far apart." -> live
pg 45, "she had she been here" -> she had been here
pg 48, "but a also bit dry." -> but also a bit dry.
pg 48, "that was due it coming" -> that was due to it coming
pg 58, "and it was now the lunch beak." -> and it was now lunch break.
pg 66, "this one my favourite" -> this one was my favourite

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joined Mar 21, 2019

finally someone bringing it to the site, I really like this novel, thank you. (adachi best girl)

"REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE iT's NoT a MaNgA i DoN't WaNnA rEaD WoRdS REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ

20190220_224152
joined Feb 18, 2019

YEESSSS YESSS YEEEEEESSSSSSSSS !!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS GETTING UPLOADED HERE AND TRANSLATED AAAAAHHHHHHHHH I LOVE READING YURI LIGHT NOVELLSS
It's so hecking rare to get good yuri LN so I'm really happy this is getting translated, these series deserve more love !!!!!

Thevoid
joined Nov 13, 2015

pg 07, "the two us" -> the two of us
pg 14, "chosen as the one go" -> as the one to go
pg 32, "that would make a weirdo too." -> that would make (her? me?) a weirdo too.
pg 34, "didn't know about about us two" -> didn't know about us two
pg 40, "she didn't have have her phone" -> she didn't have her phone
pg 43, "the shoe rack was where were separated." -> the shoe rack was where we were separated.
pg 45, "we really did leave far apart." -> live
pg 45, "she had she been here" -> she had been here
pg 48, "but a also bit dry." -> but also a bit dry.
pg 48, "that was due it coming" -> that was due to it coming
pg 58, "and it was now the lunch beak." -> and it was now lunch break.
pg 66, "this one my favourite" -> this one was my favourite

You missed a few. I'm too lazy to find them all but one I definitely remember is:

Page 33: "After that, I'd be me walking home by myself."

"I'd be me" should be "it'd be me."

But still, it's impressive that you found as many as you did, not gonna lie.

shadesofgreymoon
Swxj4ro
joined Jun 5, 2016

But still, it's impressive that you found as many as you did, not gonna lie.

cracks knuckles

Pg 6 -- overlook the first floor -- overlooked
Pg 7 -- the two us -- the two of us
Wouldn't have thought that -- "Wouldn't have thought that",
Yeah yeah, she smirked back. -- "Yeah yeah", she smirked back.
Pg 8 - calm, or rather, quiet. -- calm; or rather, quiet.
Pg 9 -- get deceived -- be deceived
wearing since I was going to get sweaty anyway, -- wearing, since I was going to get sweaty anyway,
Pg 10 - missing the the table -- missing the table
Pg 11 - hadn't always been skipping -- hadn't always skipped
or something, as well as -- or something; as well as
Pg 12- and as we went -- and when we went
sleeves, now sticking to my arms with sweat, and -- sleeves--now sticking to my arms with sweat--and /
sleeves, that were now sticking to my arms with sweat, and
Pg 13 - "... wind." Adachi muttered -- "... wind", Adachi muttered,
Pg 14 - the one go do -- the one to go do
Pg 16 - alone, and -- alone; and

I could keep going with nitpicks on things like word tenses and passive voice, but it would make me look like more of a dick, when I'm not trying to be a dick. ("Weird flex, but okay", lol)

Never, ever, underestimate the ability of a retired 40 year old book nerd with far too much time on her hands.

That said, again, I'm enjoying the fact that there have been a couple light novels translated and uploaded here. I respect all the hard work put into translating and formatting page after page of text very much.

Chinatsu%202
joined Jan 27, 2016

I don't have an issue with text-only stories being here but I still think that this reader is an odd choice of format to present them in.

Moth%20rect
joined Jul 26, 2018

@shadesofgreymoon
Really appreciate it. If you see any further mistakes you want to point out, then please do and I'll fix them for when the next chapter is released. You can also email them to me at sneikkimies@gmail.com if you'd prefer that to commenting here.

@EvilDevil
Thank you as well.

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