This is so cute. I won't say I want more because I feel like this is a great amount of lore for a oneshot. Not too much about the social scenario is told but we know enough to know a bit of the couple's dynamic.

How Demons do skinship.....
I mist disagree with the first comment I think this is by far not enough especially because it's a one shot. I do think it's a bit sweet yes but the serious lack of material makes it hard to form any actual connection with the story.

That finger on the panties, and then the next frame, "her finger is inside..."

...

DAHLIA.

CUT YOUR GOD DAMN NAILS.

Good, wish it were longer

befriend an elf
Finger her unexpectedly
Refuse to elaborate
Leave

This is very cute

That was sudden.

Can't look at demon the same way after Frieren

Considering this is from back in 2018, is there any more of these two?

Tone and setting wise, plus things getting a little bit lewd, this could totally be a Neji-sensei story. Love it ^_^

I don't get the title at all. The other world is an eau de toilette? Huh?

Yeah. Skinship.

Huh… I’m going to be honest. It was cute, but it was also a bit underwhelming. So much was set up that just… never materialized. It’s like I’m looking at the bones of a story after someone has already picked most of the meat off. I can see the traces of something interesting in there- the barest trace of a fantasy star-crossed lovers story, a whiff of some action, the tiniest crumb of sexiness- but there’s not enough of anything there to actually be noteworthy.

Also, you can’t just call someone a “surviving demon” and then do nothing to explain why you had to use that adjective.

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"The demon girl, who I initially thought to be scary, turned out to be someone who sheds beautiful tears"
. . . on her beautiful boobs.

(Sorry, but they REALLY stand out on that page)

Cute. ^_^

Literally "she fingered me. must be how she treats friends"

This warms my heart

Grea score her that she never score with Anne, xd

I don't understand the meaning of the title

Literally when I thought "ok now kiss" she really did go in for the kiss

10/10 they're such good friends

How Demons do skinship.....
I mist disagree with the first comment I think this is by far not enough especially because it's a one shot. I do think it's a bit sweet yes but the serious lack of material makes it hard to form any actual connection with the story.

that is an different type of story that REALLY needs to be sooo godly written to make an connection to other people in an god damn ONE SHOT, most authors need a little LONGER story for that to happen, but one shots? unless they are like bigger that normal one shots PLUS they need really good writing for that to happen

Huh… I’m going to be honest. It was cute, but it was also a bit underwhelming. So much was set up that just… never materialized. It’s like I’m looking at the bones of a story after someone has already picked most of the meat off. I can see the traces of something interesting in there- the barest trace of a fantasy star-crossed lovers story, a whiff of some action, the tiniest crumb of sexiness- but there’s not enough of anything there to actually be noteworthy.

Also, you can’t just call someone a “surviving demon” and then do nothing to explain why you had to use that adjective.

it’s an one shot, most stories ca do a “good job” at flashing things out, but for one shots it needs to be REALLY REALLY good written to some how meet the exagerated expectation of reader forgetting most people need more that just a few pages to tell an actually good story, let alone a REALLY good one shot