Oh my god. A good reminder than you’re under no obligation to forgive anyone. But I’m glad Xingyuan is possibly able to forgive herself, take solace that she was the victim and that there was never anything she did wrong in the first place.

I don't really understand the last few pages. What does Yura (?) mean on page 41 when she tells Koma that "she's not her problem" and "she's being looked down on". Why is she calling her a coward when the train doors are closing ?

I'm just confused ahaha ^^"

So my understanding is that “not her problem” was something Yura actually said when she was still alive as Koma kept brushing her off when it was clear something was wrong “you got hurt, but knowing you it was probably your fault, right?” It was clear that Yura was getting bullied and skipping school but Koma refused to acknowledge any of it.

Eventually Yura killed herself due to the bullying and lack of support from her supposed friend, possibly by drowning herself. As such Koma now has the guilt that she didn’t do enough to help Yura, it’s her subconscious calling her a coward for refusing to address the actual problems and potentially save her friend’s life.

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Yeah, stupid plot direction; stupid random edgy-ness. Maybe it was always planned that way all along, but it kinda gives "out of ideas by chapter 4" vibes ^^

Yeah, feels like we’ve barely dealt with the actual issues raised in first chapters before we jumped on this forced drama.

Oh man, after all this Xingyuan still blames herself for everything when nothing was her fault. Like it’s her fault for being gay or smart. I really wonder what she thinks made her detestable, the guilt and self-loathing runs deep.

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That was sudden.

What a nice little chapter with Yunduo and her Dad, that conversation felt so heartfelt and real. Sometimes parents don’t understand the lessons they teach us and then forget to correct them when they realise or change.

Huh, tandem Groundhog Day or mundane isekai?

So, does Kanna want to get Mitsuki to move so that Joe will have a reason to go? Also short hair Kanna lookin good.

Literal Goblins

My people!

I really really like this one. I like how surprisingly real it’s become after the initial ridiculousness and I like how they handled Ayaka and Risa. I see people feel sorry for her and I get it but I do sort of like the story that just because you like someone doesn’t mean they have to like you. She gave it a shot but Ayaka just isn’t into her and that’s fine.

Fun fact, Marisa is canonically PAN(krarist).

This is so absurdly OTT I don’t know whether to love it or cringe.

How can he be so pretty…

I wonder if the thing keeping Aizawa tethered is that she never had her first kiss or something?

Wait what happened at the end there? Can she see Aizawa?

Absolutely, that same girl spotted her in a window in an earlier chapter. Maybe she’s just realised she’s a ghost.

That explains why I couldn’t find it, thank you!

I’m trying to find a story I’m sure I read here, it was a story following a girl through her whole life. I remember the whole plot just can’t find it with tags, it starts with her as a child and her teacher telling her two girls can’t get married, then she dates a guy for like one panel then meets a cute tomboy in college, gets drunk and sleeps with her ending up with them getting married and ends with her on her death bed, happy.

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Suletta likes her leggy blonde.

With your hair down to your legs and your legs down to the floor.

Oh damn, kiss was much sooner than expected. But besides that I’m amazed at how well this shows the chemistry between the two of them. Like it’s not just “girl, cute!” They genuinely get along really well and seem to have a similar sense of humour, I love it!

if they had that mask the whole time couldn't she just come and go as she pleased?

Maybe they only had enough filters for one trip? There is also an implication that Mama did not want Speranza to leave, so she simply never told her that this was an option.

Yeah- if they need to change every 12hr they must have that bag full of em - and probably not enough to go back- and I get the impression Mama could not leave- she seemed to be powered by the facility. She was probably intending to let her try once she was older.

Also doesn’t look like the facility had a proper airlock so opening at any point may have irreparably contaminated the inside.

Curse you Xiaoen and your inability to just talk straight!

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I loved the little jab the writers seem to have given this chapter, the two authors were pretty succinct in their definition of a date but it was the “aficionado” who was just needlessly verbose and over the top in their definition. It’s always the enthusiasts who use too many words rather than actual writers.

Ironically kind of what I’m doing right now.

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I’m in the same boat, I want to write but it’s hard to find places where you can get feedback. I’ve mostly been posting on AO3 but it’s hard for original stories to get attention there.

I’m also too embarrassed to send gay fantasy romance to friends for feedback.