I could have sworn that I saw this before, but judging from the Duplicate tag, it's not just my imagination.

This is another one-shot that's a nice enough read but doesn't really go anywhere.

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It doesn't? Did we read the same thing?

“M’lady”, really? Ugh. Guess I’ll just read the SAD version again instead.

Soooo cute. Wish there was more T_T

funny, i was just reading the other version of this earlier today...i think i preferred that translation if i'm honest. i don't even know, it might be super literal and i don't wanna slam the TLers hard work but the way the delivery girl's dialect is rendered in this one comes across as a bit over the top to me? like, in a way that doesn't really fit the tone of the story.

story itself is still super cute tho, love that role reversal scene as well.

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Personally, I really dig this translation. I wouldn't say it's "better" or "worse" just different, with a charm all its own.

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Roodypatooti posted:

“M’lady”, really? Ugh. Guess I’ll just read the SAD version again instead.

Why don't we like "M'lady"?

Roodypatooti posted:

“M’lady”, really? Ugh. Guess I’ll just read the SAD version again instead.

Why don't we like "M'lady"?

They just don't like going to crazy town.

Gotta be honest not even i knew why she was mad until i saw the message in the sugar XD

Butch/Fem reversal is the best. Always. :D

Only cool people like her could've pulled the M'lady technique without the fedora tip... It's really advanced stuff, very effective.
Miku !!! sooo cuteeeeeeee!! I usually stay away from oneshots but this author is irresistible

Even as a duplicate story I like the fact that this translation is a little different than the other one.

"You can go for as many servings as you want"...well hot damn!!

Lilisionnach posted:

"You can go for as many servings as you want"...well hot damn!!

Ikr? that's a lot of donuts... too many calories

Lilisionnach posted:

"You can go for as many servings as you want"...well hot damn!!

Ikr? that's a lot of donuts... too many calories

They can always burn it off after.

So that was the meaning of that "duplicate" tag

As part of the religion I am currently creating, one of the tenets will be that wholesome things like girls realizing their feelings towards each other will be considered blessed (as long as it is mutual).

It's so rare to see two very high quality releases of the same story. I'm very happy that this was done (again!), and equally happy to have another excuse to come back to this one! Now if only I could pick a favourite version between the two...

Still cute, just like last time.

Hey baby, do you like my... Car!

So that was the meaning of that "duplicate" tag

Somebody translated it or published it with touch-ups before this one. There might be some minor art-tweaks or improved translations in the second one.

A good one shot, again.

Very sweet, like the sugar packet she wrote her number on.

I definitely think the previous version was more natural sounding in places where this one might be a bit more literal, but they both have their charm. Always nice to read this one again at any rate.

The original was def better. Still, I'm thinking Miku, Miku, ooeeoo.