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Karma
joined Oct 21, 2017

The English translation of +Chapter 15 is out on Chaosteam.

joined Nov 25, 2018

This chapter made me happy. These two were my favorite part of the original series.

67763073_p3
joined Dec 18, 2013

HaruMatsu is a GO!

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joined Aug 19, 2019

FINALLLYYYYYYYYY!!

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joined Mar 24, 2020

HARUMATSU NATION HOW ARE WE FEELIN??

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joined Sep 14, 2019

FINALLY YES THANK YOU

Reisen%20ds
joined Nov 30, 2016

I checked, and it seems they put words in bold because that's what the listener focuses on, or to make the core of the message visible at first glance.

Seven Seas bolds and italicizes words to change the way they sound to reflect spoken (American) English. While yes, this is because emphasis is often added while speaking and so a main idea can be made clearer, tone and character voice generally play a bigger role

These emphases also are bound to American speech patterns, so they'll never go emphasizing any old words willy nilly like some kind of William Shatner (most scanlation, with its absurd amount of pauses, can successfully sound like Shatner wrote it)

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Gt00pn-odpc
joined Sep 30, 2017

Am I the only one finding the dialogue in this chapter rather odd?

Karma
joined Oct 21, 2017

Our dreams have come true best chapter of the of Citrus Plus so far.

The thing between Harumi and Matsuri has been brewing for a long time. It's really interesting seeing how similar the both of them are. For example Harumi's tendency to remove herself out of situation where she might get hurt & Matsuri has a tendency to get involved with situations that don't directly involve her, plus they both don't like to talk about their feelings & both are stubborn, but still manage to be strong for their friends & family,

The character development was really good for them & chapter shows that Matsuri's the kind of person that never wants to admit when something is bothers them, but when confronted about it, tries to use mental gymnastics & turn the whole situation around with skillful wordplay & questionable actions. Harumi's pretty much right about her, nobody is going to know she is struggle with something if she keeps acting like this. Even the kiss was partly to try & show that what Harumi said didn't bother her when it in fact did. It also shows that Harumi does care about her a lot more than she may want to admit or even realize, but she also wants Matsuri to stop lying to herself about her troubles & acting like nothing's wrong because her tendency to act coy about her personal life & reactions to people questioning it ultimately does nothing but cause everyone close to her to worried.

Side Note
I think we can all agree that they have feelings for each other, I mean Saburo Uta has been giving a lot of hints that she been planning on having Harumi & Matsuri ending up together as a couple. And Harumi's lack of reaction to the kiss is in fact, a huge factor for HaruMatsu to become real since previously, Harumi had rejected all of Matsuri's teases & advances with clear annoyance. And the kiss happened in a moment where Matsuri wasn't lashing out so isn't like Harumi was cutting her some slack so at the very least her perception of Matsuri has shifted for the better a bit.

And let's be honest there should be more official couples than just the main pair in the series.

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joined Jun 6, 2020

Man this chapter just made Matsuri so much more interesting with regards to that family life

Mostly%20sunny
joined Oct 26, 2016

And boom goes the dynamite.

1478_nogirlsallowed
joined Oct 26, 2018

you did it you crazy sunovabitch

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joined Jul 30, 2015

HaruMatsu! Finally!

This
joined Jan 17, 2017

SHE IS CHILL WITH THAT

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joined Apr 20, 2020

THEY KISSED OML

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joined Mar 23, 2015

Am I the only one finding the dialogue in this chapter rather odd?

No, you're not the only one; I did too. I had to reread a few panels.

46-75
joined Jun 25, 2019

And let's be honest there should be more official couples than just the main pair in the series.

No. Is there even a need for that ? Idk, bring back the other side couple from just before if you want another pair.I never liked the trope that all character should have a pair/is a lesbian, like i don't care that's a yuri, doesn't mean every girl has to be in couple with another girl. Not helping for me that it's Harumin of all peoples, Miss" I didn't do anything useful during the main serie beside being here" (yeah in case anyone didn't know in this thread, i don'treally like Harumin). Not helping either that the pairing feel foirced by default because Matsuri know she can't have Yuzu so she decide to poke at Harumin. I don't find any strong chemistry, at least not romantically.
Might be a killjoy (surprising i know) but i'm not very hype at all and the lack of reaction of Harumin doesn't help. Just feel like Saburouta give Harumatsu fan some materials so they stop asking for it.

67763073_p3
joined Dec 18, 2013

There's a bunch of interesting bits of info that can be gleaned from the art.

As some have already mentioned, Sabu is pushing hard the notion of Matsuri and Harumin being foils of each other from the way she keeps drawing them in mirrored panels, like on page 12, a subtle way to let us know that they're more alike than they think. Another bit that caught my attention was how Matsuri's intent taking Harumin to her room was to probe if Harumin was there of her own volition (and thus, finally showing she cares about her) or if she was doing it to keep the facade of a model student. Initially, Harumin implied it was something she did for obligation leading to the very disappointed Matsuri of page 2. I'm convinced that Matsuri would've tried to pull a Mei and essentially assault Harumin to break her composure but the untimely arrival of her mom put an end to that plan. And finally, their discussion at the end led to both of them blushing at the other words before the big damn kiss. I don't think neither of them has blushed like that in the past.

Might be a killjoy (surprising i know) but i'm not very hype at all and the lack of reaction of Harumin doesn't help. Just feel like Saburouta give Harumatsu fan some materials so they stop asking for it.

Same here.

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joined Oct 9, 2019

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joined Dec 26, 2014

And let's be honest there should be more official couples than just the main pair in the series.

No. Is there even a need for that ? Idk, bring back the other side couple from just before if you want another pair.I never liked the trope that all character should have a pair/is a lesbian, like i don't care that's a yuri, doesn't mean every girl has to be in couple with another girl. Not helping for me that it's Harumin of all peoples, Miss" I didn't do anything useful during the main serie beside being here" (yeah in case anyone didn't know in this thread, i don'treally like Harumin). Not helping either that the pairing feel foirced by default because Matsuri know she can't have Yuzu so she decide to poke at Harumin. I don't find any strong chemistry, at least not romantically.
Might be a killjoy (surprising i know) but i'm not very hype at all and the lack of reaction of Harumin doesn't help. Just feel like Saburouta give Harumatsu fan some materials so they stop asking for it.

You don't like harumin...??? It's like you don't like puppies or something

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joined Jul 16, 2013

Am I the only one finding the dialogue in this chapter rather odd?

No, you're not the only one; I did too. I had to reread a few panels.

Yeah it's actually a bit difficult to follow for some reason. I reread it so many times but it still feels a bit weird.
Anyway my ship is finally sailing and I can die happy

Karma
joined Oct 21, 2017

And let's be honest there should be more official couples than just the main pair in the series.

No. Is there even a need for that ? Idk, bring back the other side couple from just before if you want another pair.I never liked the trope that all character should have a pair/is a lesbian, like i don't care that's a yuri, doesn't mean every girl has to be in couple with another girl. Not helping for me that it's Harumin of all peoples, Miss" I didn't do anything useful during the main serie beside being here" (yeah in case anyone didn't know in this thread, i don'treally like Harumin). Not helping either that the pairing feel foirced by default because Matsuri know she can't have Yuzu so she decide to poke at Harumin. I don't find any strong chemistry, at least not romantically.
Might be a killjoy (surprising i know) but i'm not very hype at all and the lack of reaction of Harumin doesn't help. Just feel like Saburouta give Harumatsu fan some materials so they stop asking for it.

You don't like harumin...??? It's like you don't like puppies or something

Hahaha good one sadhomu82.

46-75
joined Jun 25, 2019

And let's be honest there should be more official couples than just the main pair in the series.

No. Is there even a need for that ? Idk, bring back the other side couple from just before if you want another pair.I never liked the trope that all character should have a pair/is a lesbian, like i don't care that's a yuri, doesn't mean every girl has to be in couple with another girl. Not helping for me that it's Harumin of all peoples, Miss" I didn't do anything useful during the main serie beside being here" (yeah in case anyone didn't know in this thread, i don'treally like Harumin). Not helping either that the pairing feel foirced by default because Matsuri know she can't have Yuzu so she decide to poke at Harumin. I don't find any strong chemistry, at least not romantically.
Might be a killjoy (surprising i know) but i'm not very hype at all and the lack of reaction of Harumin doesn't help. Just feel like Saburouta give Harumatsu fan some materials so they stop asking for it.

You don't like harumin...??? It's like you don't like puppies or something

Yeah sorry but i found Harumin very useless in the main serie so it's very hard to get attached to someone who seem to be here just for being the sexy quota. The only one i found more useless was Nene.and honestly, even Nene has her moments in the election arc. When Harumin had what ? She know nothing until the last volumr and even after she know she barely do something.. Might be biased but the only thing i remember Harumin has done is give her bike so Yuzu can bring Mei to see her dad off. So yeah, i don't like Harumin. Also for the record, Matsuri is my favorite characer.

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joined Apr 20, 2013

Mangaka be like

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