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Getting more touchy feely
I like that

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Citrus + discussion 21 Dec 19:09
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Can someone explain to me the significance of last two pages or so, I don't quite get it.

Well watching her reaction at looking at her finger and the box, she clearly lost the ring.

Which she holds so dear lol
Yuzu probably wears both rings ( neck and finger) and didn't notice it

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Citrus + discussion 21 Dec 18:16
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Also, something that has been bugging me since I saw the raws was why there are two versions of the first page?

Actually they're different, Matsuri came in when class started than left & came back after class ended. Look at the clock & schedule on the blackboard between the two page.

Yes, the gag becomes obvious when you get to the end of the "repeat" page - Matsuri repeated her dramatic entrance routine until she got the response she wanted. (Sayaka's expression changes too; ideally some of the background characters would have moved & maybe more heads turning their way with the repeat, but I can understand the temptation to economize... ).

Sayaka told Matsuri that it's not ok to enter a class without permission. Matsuri left,then came back after class ,probably asked permission and told her she needed to talk

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Citrus + discussion 21 Dec 16:43
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Also, something that has been bugging me since I saw the raws was why there are two versions of the first page?

Yeah, I was wondering about that too. Maybe Saburouta accidentally published a rough draft of the first page along with the final version? Though it'd be weird that no editors or whatever caught that either.

Only first 2 panels are the exact same but yeah at first thought it was a mistake by yuri hime

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Citrus + discussion 23 Nov 15:01
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I am gonna say this once. NENE sucks and she is boring and personally I believe that nothing would be different in the manga if she never existed,unlike Harumin and Matsuri.

I've always thought Nene was pretty obviously Saburouta trolling HaruYuzu shippers, period.

LMAO that too,but in all honesty,nothing in the story would be different if she was never around

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Citrus + discussion 23 Nov 14:47
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Also sadhomu, I wasn’t joking, Homura is my most hated character in the MadoMagi, still is. I can even safely tell you that I like Nagisa more than Homura LOL. I won’t argue with your preferences, I’m just stating mine. Madoka was a good starting role for Yuki Aoi, it gave her a step up into the world of mainstream but it wasn’t one of her best roles. It was a good role that fit her though, but it stereotyped her roles for a while cuz it was just too iconic even though that role wasn’t her full potential.

First of all HEATHEN. you hate Homura? the protagonist of Madoka? I guess you were not paying any attention while watching the anime.
also Madokas voice, personally I never heard a similar voice acting like hers and trust me I watch a lot of anime. all characters in madoka are interesting but the one driving them all is and always will be Homura since she trapped everyone including her self in her universe.
also Aoi was known for other roles before madoka,mostly shaft anime works.

You guys can say whatever you want about me wanting more character development about the most ‘insignificant character in the story’ I was stating that as an example, but even joke characters have their own story especially since she is WAAAAY more than just a cameo character, just seeing how often she appears together with the main cast in the story is enough to peak my interest in how and why did she get significant enough to be with them in so many panels, I mean if her presence in the manga was like Shirapon senpai or even Momokino, popping up every once in a few chapters/volumes, I probably wouldn’t care less about what her story is. I simply want more insight on the universe of Citrus and for more expansion and development on the supporting cast.

I am gonna say this once. NENE sucks and she is boring and personally I believe that nothing would be different in the manga if she never existed,unlike Harumin and Matsuri.
the most backstory Nene could get would be that she is secretly a doujin artist of yuri manga about HARUYUZU and Mei suddenly discovers those. that would be a blast. other than that,thanks but no thanks,not interested

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Citrus + discussion 23 Nov 11:17
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As in: "Everyone in Japan agrees with me that the side characters in Citrus are more interesting than the MC, except this one guy in southern Hokkaido, but he's always been kind of a prick, and more than half-Ainu anyway."

LMAO

sadhomu82
Citrus + discussion 23 Nov 05:30
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And now I know you're just messing up with me.
Homura is and always will be the best character in anime history ( don't change my mind) and madoka was Aoi Yuki's one of her best voice works. ( Don't change my mind about that either)
I think you just like to be edgy or really you're just an idiot with an opinion about everything ( you wanna know more about Nene? The most insignificant character in citrus?? really???)

Just remember that you are dealing with someone who thinks "Matsuri is the most mature character in the series" https://dynasty-scans.com/forum/posts/637415 , and what sort of person that would be.

Then it all makes sense (and doesn't seem worth arguing about).

Yes I've read all the nonsense they wrote

sadhomu82
Citrus + discussion 23 Nov 04:14
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Reading citrus and not caring about mei and yuzu is like watching madoka and not giving a shit about homura and her pink goddess

True, but yes that was me. I absolutely hated Homura and honestly didn’t give a shit about her. Madoka was Yuki Aoi being Yuki Aoi, didn’t really care for her either... Watched it for Sayaka and Kyoko. Main characters aren’t everything to a story, if it was it would be a very sad and lonely linear script.

There is such a thing as watching for the plot. People can watch a series just for the story without giving a shit about the characters. The focus of everyone is different. But it is possible to watch/read a series without giving a damn about the main characters simply because the main characters just don’t feel important to you to warrant your attention, if if they are the driving factor of the plot itself. It’s a bit ironic really, that you can’t separate the two, but I’m pretty sure we’ve all watched a series at one point where you only care about the universe or the music without any care for the characters. In the end we’re all biased and tilt to what we like...

And now I know you're just messing up with me.
Homura is and always will be the best character in anime history ( don't change my mind) and madoka was Aoi Yuki's one of her best voice works. ( Don't change my mind about that either)
I think you just like to be edgy or really you're just an idiot with an opinion about everything ( you wanna know more about Nene? The most insignificant character in citrus?? really???)

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Citrus + discussion 22 Nov 19:16
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Reading citrus and not caring about mei and yuzu is like watching madoka and not giving a shit about homura and her pink goddess

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Citrus + discussion 21 Nov 14:36
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page 109 is replaced or it would eternally haunt me

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Citrus + discussion 20 Nov 14:01
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new version just been uploaded here too,hope makes everything clearer now

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Citrus + discussion 20 Nov 07:27
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I talked it over with my translator,there was a misunderstanding in some panels ,so she reviewed the translation and a new version will be uploaded soon enough when an uploader is not busy to do so. sorry for the rush , we were just hyped to release

Hey don't worry about it sadhomu82 we all make mistakes some times, besides with what was happening in this chapter anybody would be hyped up.

HARUMATSU BANZAI

sadhomu82
Citrus + discussion 20 Nov 06:21
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New version is uploaded on mangadex for now, dynasty later, I've already send the files to an uploader

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Citrus + discussion 20 Nov 05:26
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I talked it over with my translator,there was a misunderstanding in some panels ,so she reviewed the translation and a new version will be uploaded soon enough when an uploader is not busy to do so. sorry for the rush , we were just hyped to release

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Citrus + discussion 19 Nov 20:08
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Did the translator in mangadex change?

yes we had another translator this time due to our main translator being busy
we upload the same chapter in both sites,what do you mean mangadex?

Er... I read this in Mangadex before reading it here.

And was it any different??

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Citrus + discussion 19 Nov 18:19
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Hm...Can't say I understood everything, but yay for more yuri.

like seriously do you think anyone cares about the plot at this point? harumastu is finally canon LOL

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Citrus + discussion 19 Nov 18:00
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Did the translator in mangadex change?

yes we had another translator this time due to our main translator being busy
we upload the same chapter in both sites,what do you mean mangadex?

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Citrus + discussion 19 Nov 16:25
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And let's be honest there should be more official couples than just the main pair in the series.

No. Is there even a need for that ? Idk, bring back the other side couple from just before if you want another pair.I never liked the trope that all character should have a pair/is a lesbian, like i don't care that's a yuri, doesn't mean every girl has to be in couple with another girl. Not helping for me that it's Harumin of all peoples, Miss" I didn't do anything useful during the main serie beside being here" (yeah in case anyone didn't know in this thread, i don'treally like Harumin). Not helping either that the pairing feel foirced by default because Matsuri know she can't have Yuzu so she decide to poke at Harumin. I don't find any strong chemistry, at least not romantically.
Might be a killjoy (surprising i know) but i'm not very hype at all and the lack of reaction of Harumin doesn't help. Just feel like Saburouta give Harumatsu fan some materials so they stop asking for it.

You don't like harumin...??? It's like you don't like puppies or something

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Image Comments 31 Oct 20:03
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The doggy style

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Citrus + discussion 23 Oct 18:43
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"Uhh...The wrong sibling...?" Is actually
"Eh... SHE SHRUNK!?"

Hahaha, sadly it doesn't surprise me that they wrote something that it has nothing to do with the original.

The last part is not so much as a "let's... talk in my room" as it is a "senpai... can we talk in my room?" Because Matsuri is being extremely formal, even more than usual. Which is a nuance that is very hard to replicate in english cuz by being overly formal in Japanese is a way to express anger, sarcasm, indifference, sadness etc...

Well, in English you can be rather formal, it depends on how much indirect you are. I'm not a native speaker, but from what I know "Senpai. I wonder if it would be fine if we talked in my room." is a rather formal/polite way of saying that phrase. You can be shorter/less formal, but it's possible in English too. Otherwise, you can use the usual 'old' English to seem formal without lengthening the text. As per the effect of being formal, that happens pretty much anywhere, even if it's not used as much as in Japanese.

Also, this is actually VERY VERY MUCH lost in translation.

Yeah, but there is way and way to translate. Citrus, ch 14, official (bold in the original):

I... / really like you... Mei. / As sisters... / as family. / I feel like it's my job to look after you...

Current translation on dynasty (from Yuri Project):

I... I... / I do love you... Mei. / Disregarding we are sisters, / disregarding we are family... / I cherish you, personally, an incredible amount!

I've no idea what is the original, but one of the two is clearly wrong, and the other fits more with the overall images and events.

But Matsuri speaks to Harumin ONLY in keigo (Japanese polite speech). True that [...]

Oh, I didn't know she spoke in formal speech. How interesting. I never actually noticed that she has always called Harumin formally, probably because I didn't expect it from her. I mean, there is a "Hey, you there with the boobs." In the official translation of ch 31. Don't know how it is in the original.

[...] Cuz so much stuff is just lost in translation and it's just really sad that the translators are unable to replicate the nuances or at least something close to the original Japanese raws.

You could get close if they put translation notices to explain everything, like they do for the bible and other ancient texts. Or at least the first time someone appears to describe how they talk. No one thinks the reader cares, so they won't do it. Still, no hope in getting the nuances if they get whole phrases wrong.

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Woah, I've no idea what's written, but it's exactly the same characters. 'How fascinating.'

Chapter 14 was translated by yuri project

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I'm assuming the Mangaka learned from Citrus+ and is like here is an entire 4 year timeskip with lots of questions I can now milk for later

at least citrus has memorable and likable characters
this one? I doubt anyone will remember their names after a while or even their blunt drawn faces

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mangaka was going around in circles with the story since many chapters ago.so why is everyone surprised the end somehow sucked? I bet they really wanted to end their story since it was going nowhere and probably was forced to continue for 4 freaking years when it could easily be like 2 volumes long without the boring characters chapters etc.
hopefully this mangaka will continue working for yuri hime with a better and sexier story cause we all read her dounjins and they are divine
this manga was simply......MEH

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Citrus + discussion 21 Sep 18:04
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So is it me, or page 27 dialogue reads weird? Like it doesn't flow well. I dunno how to explain it.

our translator had a bit of a confusion there. Saburouta has been pretty vague with her dialogues lately and she has some hard time guessing what's going on (at least that's what she tells me cause I don't understand Japanese)
I thought she was talking about Mei first,but Harumi is imagining how Matsuri would respond if she was confronted about her absence only to finally realize that Matsuri is avoiding everyone so she wont get hurt instead of playing her usual mind games

It's those damn Japanese pronouns (or lack thereof). On the previous page Harumin says:

"All Prez does is magically solve things from afar. Of course she wouldn't understand."

But then on page 27, Harumin continues: "If she responds with something like . . ." But the referent for the pronoun "she" has changed--now it's Matsuri, who we see in the first panel.

English grammar demands that the name precede the pronoun, and the referent doesn't change until we get a new name. (Modernist writers like Faulkner violate that rule all the time, but they're just being bastards when they do.)

My translator had to guess Harumin was talking about Matsuri cause she used "omae"
She wouldn't use that to refer to Mei

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Not sure if next chapter is the last or if the end is coming real soon. Is it written somewhere? That the next chapter is for sure the last?

Yes it's the last chapter, fuckin finally