Well, ever since the translation was dropped, I was wondering "Just how bad can this be? It can't be that bad." Well, it sure was. It sure was... I normally enjoy the whole Homura-esque time-travelling plotline, but this made zero sense and also... the het lol.
Man I wish this hadn't ditched the setup of the first few chapters for the same lesbian time travel plot as everything else written in the last ten years.
How common is this kinda plotline? I've enjoyed it in both Madoka and Qualia (not quite as much here though), so I'd be happy to read more stuff like it. Then again, it might get pretty old if I read it too many times, but... well, these three things were very different stories, at least.