I prefer longer, more slow paced stories. And i was excited with how it opened. But it's a tad short even though it has some great scenes that aren't shown enough, as Doctor_Hoot mentioned above, with the negatives of society that comes along with their relationship.
I would have loved to have seen more of the characters, espescially the apparent boyish side (only really heard about it) of Hinako.
Oh, what i would do for another 3, or 10, more chapters.