lmao what a retarded story.

WOOOAH!! Okay then! That happened

I'm so confused. Why would you write something so depressing and unfair, the world is already shit enough. I WAS HERE FOR FLUFFY YURI WHAT IS THIS.

I think a lot people missed the dark humor in the ending. There was a LOT of tragic irony in what happened. When life gives you lemons and you accidentally get some in your eye and then trip and smash your teeth out on the table while trying to make them into lemonade, you need to learn to laugh it off. I mean there is often humor in tragedy.

That's a good way of putting it. This story is definitely meant to be at least a little funny. The reactions of all the other women when her marriage is announced are too over-the-top. Same with the sudden transition from sex scene to pregnancy. There's a certain silliness throughout, and I think anyone who takes this too seriously is reading it incorrectly.

Hey, that's pretty good...

That said, the development between Yamada and Seo was way too quick. It makes the story look like a cheap yuri NTR.

Also, I think Seo should've told Kyouko she was going out with someone else. You kind of owe that to the most recent person you've slept with.

I wish I could unread this.

I liked this story. Not all stories have to have happy endings to be good. It was sad but interesting. It felt like a cautionary tale in a way. Well done.

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I think a lot people missed the dark humor in the ending. There was a LOT of tragic irony in what happened. When life gives you lemons and you accidentally get some in your eye and then trip and smash your teeth out on the table while trying to make them into lemonade, you need to learn to laugh it off. I mean there is often humor in tragedy.

That's a good way of putting it. This story is definitely meant to be at least a little funny. The reactions of all the other women when her marriage is announced are too over-the-top. Same with the sudden transition from sex scene to pregnancy. There's a certain silliness throughout, and I think anyone who takes this too seriously is reading it incorrectly.

You know it is a little darkly funny that a depressed lesbian gets drunk, has a one night stand, with a man, (quite possibly the only time she's ever been with one.) , and ends up pregnant and engaged. It's like a line from that old Alanis Morissete song.

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It's weird I would love to see a follow up story, where Kyouko, crashes the wedding and takes Mitsuko back. However, I think a sequel giving the women a happy ending would ruin this exquisite angst I feel for it. As much as I hate stories like this, they're the ones that stick with me the longest. Sometimes you just have to leave your comfort zone.

I’m kinda sad over the outcome for MC, yet she stuck to her moral obligations to see through the pregnancy and change her lifestyle for her child.

You can only raise a child properly when you wear a skirt and marry a man?

No... but going it alone is really hard. Luckily, the male was willing to take responsibility and get married to her. It’d be hell to negotiate an open relationship on the wedding day.

I remember comedian Chris Rock mentioning how hard it is raising a kid on your own and saying it wasn’t a good idea... “like driving a car with your feet, but it’s not a good idea.”

If she truly didn’t want the pregnancy, adoption or abortion would have been options open to her. In my opinion, the MC would have gone for it... I think she’s that shallow of a person and would have done it IF the man hadn’t stepped up to the plate.

Edit: thanks for replying to my post.

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It's weird I would love to see a follow up story, where Kyouko, crashes the wedding and takes Mitsuko back. However, I think a sequel giving the women a happy ending would ruin this exquisite angst I feel for it. As much as I hate stories like this, they're the ones that stick with me the longest. Sometimes you just have to leave your comfort zone.

It’s these morally grey mangas that really spark the debates. I think the manga should be left alone. It’s kind of a train wreck as it is. I personally don’t like it, nor do I hate it. This isn’t a vanilla yuri, there’s some realism here when people make serious life changes overnight, whatever philosophy or code she lived by dropped over more important matters of caring for a kid. Life happens this way.

To sum up: I enjoy the discussion here more than the manga itself.

I think a lot people missed the dark humor in the ending. There was a LOT of tragic irony in what happened. When life gives you lemons and you accidentally get some in your eye and then trip and smash your teeth out on the table while trying to make them into lemonade, you need to learn to laugh it off. I mean there is often humor in tragedy.

That's a good way of putting it. This story is definitely meant to be at least a little funny. The reactions of all the other women when her marriage is announced are too over-the-top. Same with the sudden transition from sex scene to pregnancy. There's a certain silliness throughout, and I think anyone who takes this too seriously is reading it incorrectly.

You know it is a little darkly funny that a depressed lesbian gets drunk, has a one night stand, with a man, (quite possibly the only time she's ever been with one.) , and ends up pregnant and engaged. It's like a line from that old Alanis Morissete song.

Good points here! Whatever I just said, don’t worry about it... we’re talking over a manga!

Oh, one last thing: what song is it? (“Ironic“?)

You know it is a little darkly funny that a depressed lesbian gets drunk, has a one night stand, with a man, (quite possibly the only time she's ever been with one.) , and ends up pregnant and engaged. It's like a line from that old Alanis Morissete song.

She's pretty clearly been with men before. Look at pages 5 and 6: she has a history of relationships with men. If anything, I'd say it's more likely that Kyouko is the only woman she's ever been with, since we have no evidence stating otherwise. It's unclear if you could even call her a lesbian; her sexual preference is never really established.

This was quite refreshing among all those sugary yuri shit. 10/10

why was this even posted lmao, wasnt this the manga that got the magazine cancelled?????

Yeah, it's almost impressive how this one-shot single-handedly murdered the magazine.

Yeah, it's almost impressive how this one-shot single-handedly murdered the magazine.

Lmao, as it should. That was legitimately disgusting to read. That was actually homophobic lmao. That's like the whole, "she just needed a man to turn her back to being straight." Like that's literally what that was. I'm still pondering why the fuck this was requested though, like that's pretty sick lmao.

EDIT: Hmm, people who think it's a "lesson learned" ending need to realize that these girls were portrayed in honestly really misogynistic ways. Like why else do you think the magazine literally got murdered after this was published in it?

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Bisex, one night stand, drunk

Hmm... suddenly i remembered, One of the most Seiju's fucked up mistake in 'What does the fox Say"... but fortunatelly that dude use the condom, not like this Yamada dude

Yeah, it's almost impressive how this one-shot single-handedly murdered the magazine.

Lmao, as it should. That was legitimately disgusting to read. That was actually homophobic lmao. That's like the whole, "she just needed a man to turn her back to being straight."

if that was what the comic said, the ending would be a happy one instead of a sad one.

why. WHY?! of all the works, why translate this one???????

That like the first time I see you commenting a work without pointing some error. I guess I did good not to read this...

Anyway, I doubt this work was for responsible for killing the magazine. If anything, it wouldn't surprise me if that work allowed as a last ditch effort to bring attention to the magazine, but look like it didn't work...

lmao, that was pretty nasty. kinda funny how something like that made it all the way here.

No, it definitely was the one that killed it. It's not some sort of speculation. Also how does that work in your head? THIS one-shot is what you imagine would save a yuri magazine from dying? C'mon.

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No, it definitely was the one that killed it. It's not some sort of speculation. Also how does that work in your head? THIS one-shot is what you imagine would save a yuri magazine from dying? C'mon.

Do you have a source for that ? Some people here said the magazine was already in trouble before this publication so I don't really know who to believe, and I'm pretty curious to read the whole story of their fallbif possible.

And I'm not saying it would have saved it. I just think some people up there thought they could bring some interest back in their magazine by stiring some controversy or attracting new reader who like theses sort of thing. I just don't see why else they would publish a work like that in the first place

No, it definitely was the one that killed it. It's not some sort of speculation.

Do you actually have evidence for that, or did you just hear it somewhere? This is the sort of thing you'd need some hard data to determine, like subscription numbers dropping off, the publication suddenly going from profitable to deep in the red, etc. all of it attributable to this single oneshot rather than any other factors.

Without such evidence, I think it's most reasonable to assume that Mebae died the same way countless other yuri magazines have.

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This has crippled my heart...