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I totally agree. I propose a 3 chapters story. The first is only that. In the second, she found someone that react and think like her and they support each other in their reaction. In the third, they confess to each other and kiss in public. Looking at them, 2 girls, passing by and who don't know each other, react in the same way for a begin of a new cycle of yuri couple.

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Ok, just finished to read the dating sister that met on a dating site, the CPR chapter. This is hillarious XD

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Loving this whole dynamic, hope for more chapters. Plus, video rental stores are nostalgic for me, so that helps as well. XD

This is amazing, its simple and so cute. I bet she is just teasing her to see her reaction.

What's you avatar from?

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i wish this was continued over the yuri inn

pod7 posted:

i wish this was continued over the yuri inn

This one should have been continued even more.

pod7 posted:

i wish this was continued over the yuri inn

This one should have been continued even more.

give the author a break , incest bigger than yuri.

mmmm.... I really liked the old Mochi style (unique, funny, simple and very cute and fitting for the comedy), but well, this new style is not bad either. Still, Mochi 's stories are soooooo good <3

"This is too amazing"

Mochi's stuff in a nutshell.

So, style update and a promise of future chapters? Sounds good to me!

mmmm.... I really liked the old Mochi style (unique, funny, simple and very cute and fitting for the comedy), but well, this new style is not bad either. Still, Mochi 's stories are soooooo good <3

Yes. Imo the old Mochi art has its own charm in the simplicity of it. The background has more detail in the new art, but rhe character suffers a bit as a result. For example, the pupil-less eyes conveys more character than the "generic" pupil-ed eyes. Thick lines also makes the characters stand out more.

The new art isn't bad, per se, but it looks more generic than the old art.

Mochi au lait knows how to push my buttons

I much much preferred the flat annoyed look of the previous version from the rental woman. These new eyes are weird as all heck to me.

#bringbackblackdotsforeyes

I have the weirdest feeling of deja-vu...
...Hey! Wait a second!

LMAO THE BACKGROUND CHARACTER IS ALL OF YURI FANS

Mochi Au Lucas will redraw and retcon everything!!

(J/k, this is nice to read again. Kana's nose isn't bleeding, neither!)

I much much preferred the flat annoyed look of the previous version from the rental woman. These new eyes are weird as all heck to me.

#bringbackblackdotsforeyes

Its weird but the solid black does look better for some reason, maby the deadpan look adds to the comedy perhaps.

I like the adjusted artstyle, but I think I like the phrasing of the original better

Does this men IT Will be continiued?

I feel like the art in the original was more dynamic.

Also, don't rental fees usually get cheaper when you rent things for longer periods? Or is the 30k a day is only for 12 hours?

Please don't play with ther heart that much, ms. rental shop clerk, even if her first time approaching you was terrible and bully-worthy.

Yuri fangirl lol xD Aye-aye she returns!

That was cute. :D

The old art is definitely more expressive.

I will say I too proffer the older art style (though the new look isn't bad) - but I'm glad to see this one seems to be getting more chapters?

Eh I think the older style is a lot better, it's more expressive also the customer's design in general feels lesser.
Like in the original the bangs under her eyes and the way she carried herself said a lot that I feel is missing here

I don't understand you people seeing the old style as more expressive/dynamic than the current one. It's the complete opposite for me.