Huh? The pacing is so strange, it feels like nothing really happened in this story

Huh? The pacing is so strange, it feels like nothing really happened in this story

Yeah right? That confession came out of nowhere

(And so did that haircut, damn that was bad)

Somehow I fell like I'm reading a shounen ai manga :v

That felt mote like the outline of a story than the actual thing. What's really bugging me is what was with the random gifts?

i like how the mouth is placed differently on the face depending on the expression. both interesting and weird... and it kinda gives off an art school feeling don't even ask

Felt like a long story over compressed into too few pages. Having said that I still found it cute and liked it.

Felt like a long story over compressed into too few pages. Having said that I still found it cute and liked it.

Phew I thought I was the only one who actually liked this story

Huh? The pacing is so strange, it feels like nothing really happened in this story

Yeah right? That confession came out of nowhere

(And so did that haircut, damn that was bad)

your boner is as confused as mine

Instant fave. Really enjoyed the unique artstyle and characters. It has a Life is Strange vibe to it that I can't help but get behind. I don't think the pacing was that bad. It's a longer-ish one-shot and the story's pretty self-contained. Every interaction felt like it was building to her outburst. The beginning of the story tells us that she's looking for something and the full-page portrait of art-girl is Aoba being found. It takes until her confession the realize that this girl is what she's been looking for, and then she fucking commits. It's refreshing when compared to the more cliched stories of pining and denial. It does feel like chapter 1 of a longer series, though. I'm happy with what we got, but I definitely want more.

That was cute, I thought her new hair was cute too.

I don't really get it.

I don't really get it.

maybe because you use Sakurako as your profile picture

Really enjoyed this one-shot. Art girl is interesting and feels like a deeper character than what is shown.

This is deffo something that needs to be spread out into a multi-chapter work. There's so much potential with the characters and I agree, this looks like a pitch for a series.

I really like the premise. There needs to be more college/adult yuri. I really love the art too. It's messy but cute, and kinda reflective of both characters.

Also I can just imagine this:
Me: does literally anything
Narrator: Dumbass ^

Edit: Also art girl giving random gifts reminds me of a cat.

last edited at Dec 3, 2018 4:57AM

I don't really get it.

maybe because you use Sakurako as your profile picture

take that back you bully.

It was an enjoyable read. I have to say, I am a sucker for the expressions this author uses. Hoping for a little more information on the pair, maybe a 2nd oneshot from Toudou’s point of view?

I don't get it, but i enjoyed

[ DUMBASS ]

Well, that certainly escalated quickly. It started out interesting, but then kinda felt like a bootleg version of bloom into you. This would’ve been nice as a couple chapters
Also, props to both these girls. Oil paint smells like shit and enduring it without a mask for hours is amazing

last edited at Dec 3, 2018 7:53AM

I love this, college yuri is the best! The dynamic was also really interesting. I hope this becomes part of a longer series at some point.

Unusual, but also very cute.

too cute, i actually liked this
especially the 'paint me like one of your french girls' vibe

last edited at Dec 3, 2018 3:41PM

That was really nice. The art was a bit shaky, but that made it feel a bit warmer to me somehow.
And that poor girl[dumbass] gave herself the goofiest blunt bangs, oh man.

Well, that certainly escalated quickly. It started out interesting, but then kinda felt like a bootleg version of bloom into you. This would’ve been nice as a couple chapters
Also, props to both these girls. Oil paint smells like shit and enduring it without a mask for hours is amazing

I get that oil paint smells weird (bad for most people) but, for some reason, I like it.

Given that it doesn't gets to a point where it's as overpowering as half a bottle of perfume that is...

....well, that was a little weird but nothing more, I want a new Yuri story with the "Romance" tag xd