this feels a bit messy. like i can see the vision and i really like the vision, but the flow felt a bit weird. i do agree that the bullying scene is absurd and takes you out of it. i think some of the visuals too are kind of trying too hard to show a deranged character when the writing is attempting to show subtle or behind the scenes manipulations. theres a bit of a mismatch. reading some of the comments, i do agree that not actually seeing punishment aside from the choking near the end makes it a bit underwhelming. i feel like it adds to that messy feeling.
still, i do like the idea behind the story. yandere mind break is always a fun treat.
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