I like how she did the hair

I think this might be the first time the "secretly dating" line wasn't said in first person. For a moment there I thought the chapter would be from the pov of a classmate who already figured out they are dating. I got all excited for nothing. Cute as always, though.

I think this might be the first time the "secretly dating" line wasn't said in first person. For a moment there I thought the chapter would be from the pov of a classmate who already figured out they are dating. I got all excited for nothing. Cute as always, though.

yeah same here. i was like "so which one saw them kissing?"

I think this might be the first time the "secretly dating" line wasn't said in first person. For a moment there I thought the chapter would be from the pov of a classmate who already figured out they are dating. I got all excited for nothing. Cute as always, though.

You're right. I went back and looked, and the only other time that bit was in the third person was Chapter 10, in the flashback: "Chidori and Nanoha. Before they had started dating."

But I think it's just third person narration, not sure if it actually means someone's found out, though that is certainly possible. Just going by memory, I think that the introduction in the third person is used pretty frequently from this point onward.

I like this chapter, she makes it clear she likes her for the girl she is not as a "prince".

Exactly! Chidori doesn't see her the same way the other girls do.

I get it, I get it!
doesn't get it.

Why so short feeling, chapter?

"You're a girl, act like it!"

Uuh... how about she acts the way she feels more comfortable with?

Chidori, why you so controlling?

"You're a girl, act like it!"

Uuh... how about she acts the way she feels more comfortable with?

Chidori, why you so controlling?

I don't know how you missed the point of this chapter so much

I love the fact that this isn't another story of "I ended falling in love and it was with a girl", it's a

Also Chidori it's good with hair care, is Chidori a young Kaoru? A conspiranoico thread.

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I like this chapter, she makes it clear she likes her for the girl she is not as a "prince".

Exactly! Chidori doesn't see her the same way the other girls do.

I loved that! She loves her girl as she is ❤
Chidori is so gay ❤

So the others know. The narration was in third person, they gotta know

Did anybody notice how in this introduction (chapter 20), Chidori and Nanoha were referred to in the third person. Does that mean somebody outside knows their relationship?

I don't see why Chidori and Nanoha keep saying they're dating, because they're really not. I mean, how is what they are doing together any different than being close friends.

Dating just means that two people are hanging out in a romantic setting. Believe it or not, what they are doing isn't that different than a lot of early couples, and I'd argue that being in a relationship is far more casual than people make it out to be. I say the only way to tell if two people are romantically attracted aside from PDA (which even that isn't that accurate), is how they react to each other. I would go on a long spiel about how these two are romantically attracted to each other, but I'm typing on my phone and my fingers are cramping.

re Nya-chan:

"You're a girl, act like it!"

Uuh... how about she acts the way she feels more comfortable with?

Chidori, why you so controlling?

I got the as a girl bit, but I didn't care for this delivery either. Hoping to be able to wipe this from my mind. :/

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Wait... Who is the long black haired girl at the end?

Wait... Who is the long black haired girl at the end?

Probably pre-haircut Chidori from the last page of chapter 14

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That's some lesbian activity.

nanoha had her eyes on the prize thats for sure

c:<

I found it laugh-out-loud hilarious that at first Nanoha seemed to be playing that old, old double-entendre game of using a phrase like “how huge they are”—meaning Chidori’s eyes or something.

But no, it’s really her darling’s mega-boobs after all.

Nanoha in her time off

Wonder who is the narrator this time?

re Nya-chan:

"You're a girl, act like it!"

Uuh... how about she acts the way she feels more comfortable with?

Chidori, why you so controlling?

I got the as a girl bit, but I didn't care for this delivery either. Hoping to be able to wipe this from my mind. :/

I didn't see it as Chidori being controlling. Nanoha appeared uncomfortable with how others treated her as a prince, as a male surrogate, but Chidori reassured her that she's every bit the girl she views and feels herself to be. The scene did feel a bit forceful, but I don't think that was the intent. I feel that Chidori felt it was just ridiculous for Nanoha not to view herself as the girl she is and feels to be.

I appreciate the moment for that it also seems to say that just because Nanoha is athletic that doesn't mean she's boyish (the wrongful assumption that sports are only for boys). I also appreciate the chapter because it accepts that part of Chidori's attraction towards Nanoha, and Nanoha's attraction towards Chidori, is in part because they are both girls. There seemed to be a growing "gender doesn't matter" trend in Yuri which is true for some, but not for everyone. Not for me anyway.

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just another way that Nanoha's stupidity is cute but funny.

Nanoha you perv