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joined Oct 12, 2010

Loved it.

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joined Sep 9, 2016

Seconded.That's a premise I don't think I've seen before. Am I the only one that thinks Takemiya-sensei is the best at executing plots like this?

Texas%20tech%20sop
joined Sep 12, 2015

That was a great read. I always enjoy Takemiya Jin's works regardless.

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joined Aug 16, 2014

Didn't do anything for me. It was too quick for me to know or care about any of the characters.
And I thought Cheating wasn't supposed to be paired with Netorare?

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joined Feb 23, 2016

Hmmmm ಠ_ಠ

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joined Mar 14, 2016

It's actually kind of refreshing to see protagonists that are equally as fucked up.

Reminds me of that one of the girl who gets her girlfriend to rip her toenail off that I can't remember the name of.

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joined Sep 14, 2014

you can never go wrong with Takemiya Jin, even with netorare

last edited at Jul 3, 2018 4:19PM

Kat%202
joined Mar 6, 2012

Not gonna lie.. I kinda wanted more with the sister

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joined Apr 5, 2018

doesnt this need the incest tag?

A2bcf11834a1918b3f09b4219b2a099f_r
joined Aug 16, 2014

doesnt this need the incest tag?

It's probably omited for spoiler reasons.

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joined Jun 12, 2015

Perfect.

AllosaurusJei
joined Nov 7, 2017

Seconded.That's a premise I don't think I've seen before. Am I the only one that thinks Takemiya-sensei is the best at executing plots like this?

It's the way they draw. You just feel like the characters can be damaged people despite them being gorgeous. While other people have managed it with really smooth beautiful models. Takemiya never bothers with those "crazy eyes" so it all just feels more complete and human.

Yuri
joined May 11, 2015

you can never go wrong with Takemiya Jin, even with neotorare

Personally they're a hit and miss for me. some of them are really good and some of them are just to fucked up for me. This one's of the latter category...

last edited at Jun 29, 2018 5:15PM

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joined Jun 9, 2018

I have a feeling that there will be NTR

Why will it be? ...

Perfil
joined Sep 21, 2013

Oh god... this is so, good in a bad way...

Sayaka_ava
joined Nov 23, 2014

Didn't do anything for me. It was too quick for me to know or care about any of the characters.

I agree with this. There is something to be said about "short and sweet", but this just felt like a cliffsnotes of a story. I suppose I am not the biggest fan of this kind of story in the first place, but a better buildup at least would have given it more impact.

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joined Jul 20, 2016

At least the other party was fine with the netorare

Capturar
joined Jun 27, 2018

doesnt this need the incest tag?

It's probably omited for spoiler reasons.

Which is a problem... I've seen someone suggest "blackened out" tags for stuff that's spoiler (like this). Might be a good solution for cases like this.

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joined May 7, 2017

Masterpiece 9/10, it's not a 10 because does not contain NSFW enough

joined Aug 11, 2014

Hahaha, I also thought having both "netorare" and "cheating" tags were superfluous, but thinking about it, both are accurate in this case, they just don't apply to the same relationship. That was surprisingly fun, despite what I expected from the tags.

It was definitely short, but I kind of think the brevity makes it more palatable to most audiences. You could certainly get a lot more meat out of the concept by elaborating on the characters, their relationships, and the feelings involved, but that would make it a much heavier story, and a bit too sour for a lot of people to easily enjoy. Stripping it right down to the essential three hit combo of setup-twist-payoff means that you don't have enough time to get emotionally invested, so it's not a downer when things go awry. As it is, it's more like an amusing and slightly spicy joke.

last edited at Jun 29, 2018 5:55PM

Xdff
joined Jul 16, 2017

It ended...well? I think?
Btw great manga, Takemiya you did it again :D

A2bcf11834a1918b3f09b4219b2a099f_r
joined Aug 16, 2014

doesnt this need the incest tag?

It's probably omited for spoiler reasons.

Which is a problem... I've seen someone suggest "blackened out" tags for stuff that's spoiler (like this). Might be a good solution for cases like this.

That'd be a spoiler itself for the fact that a story has a twist, tho'... YMMV on how much of a problem that is, ofc.

Xdff
joined Jul 16, 2017

It ended...well? I think?
Btw great manga, Takemiya you did it again :D

Capturar
joined Jun 27, 2018

doesnt this need the incest tag?

It's probably omited for spoiler reasons.

Which is a problem... I've seen someone suggest "blackened out" tags for stuff that's spoiler (like this). Might be a good solution for cases like this.

That'd be a spoiler itself for the fact that a story has a twist, tho'... YMMV on how much of a problem that is, ofc.

True. I see another problem too: some tags are triggering for some people (like rape is for me), and it would be a problem if these people were not informed of potential triggers because they chose to avoid spoilers.

Capturar
joined Jun 27, 2018

It ended...well? I think?
Btw great manga, Takemiya you did it again :D

I guess you can say it did. I'd feel bad for the girlfriends who were just being used by Maria, but then again, they're cheaters so they probably deserved it.

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