what a pair of perverts

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I could identify in chapter 1 but huh there is just way too much of it in chapter 2 I feel sorry (and pain) for her sweet spot...

I feel sorry (and pain) for her sweet spot...

There is a permanent cure for that called sulphuric acid.

"I'm wearing underwear, but it's not helping."
Such a great quote that's appropriate in so many situations. Funerals. Bad movies. Exams. And so on.

I demand a third part in which they live happily ever after in the fields of onions

I love how the breasts look like a real woman's breasts. Breasts aren't naturally boob job shaped all the time.

YES, ALL OF THE YES. Natural looking breasts are so sexy to me, I don't get why more authors don't always draw them like that

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Just the right amount of Andrew W.K.

I love how the breasts look like a real woman's breasts. Breasts aren't naturally boob job shaped all the time.

Except the women don't otherwise look "real", it just looks kind of gross to randomly throw saggy boobs and rib lines in there IMHO.

Also this mangaka's excessive fluids are nasty.

Some women do look like this in real life though. Especially with thinner girls with boobs and depending on her position. Agree with you on the fluids but overall Im liking their relationship and this story

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After all that, I wonder with myself how that room smells now.

There is so much going on in the panels that I can barely understand what I'm seeing.

OH MY GOD, THERE'S MORE?! SWEET LORD IN HEAVENS, YES

I have walked around the town without underwear on, felt sexy for a minute.

Turns to the girl with whom she's been in a sexually active relationship with for the past few months

"You're my first straight girlfriend"

Turns to the girl with whom she's been in a sexually active relationship with for the past few months

"You're my first straight girlfriend"

Turns to the girl who's also grabbing her titty in the same panel lol

I was not expecting a sequel but cool!

take a shot every time they have sex

All right writing, but the artist has some problems. There's basically just a single facial expression (I call it "slightly worried"), and body parts are prone to grow and shrink drastically in size from panel to panel. Sometimes a head can be a fourth of someone's entire body mass, other times half their height is just leg. When you draw porn, not being able to draw basic anatomy or interesting expressions is not a good thing.

Also what's the point of age gap if they both have the exact same face and body, and look the exact same age?

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What's up with that grey border on either side of the page?

Peeps here complaining about excessive fluids in Assagi dojin XD this shits dry compared to the usual work (most of the dojins have water sports in it!) This one was top notch BTW, relationship development wise and smut wise, Assagi Ryuu is an amazing mangaka, love your work homie

I find myself agreeing with Bugpope on this one. There seems to be a downgrade, at least for me, in the art from Ryuu's earlier works. The anatomy isn't as consistent and the characters seem, if anything, less expressive than in stories like I Fell In Love For the First Time or Heavenly Garden Where the Maidens Bloom. The art here feels much more cramped too, like every panel needs to be densely packed. Again, in the older work there was more white space, allowing the characters to breathe and the reader to get a better view of what was happening.

Peeps here complaining about excessive fluids in Assagi dojin XD this shits dry compared to the usual work (most of the dojins have water sports in it!) This one was top notch BTW, relationship development wise and smut wise, Assagi Ryuu is an amazing mangaka, love your work homie

It's not doujin. I wish people would learn what that word actually means.

This was nice. I agree with badnat about the fluids, though.

take a shot every time they have sex

You'll pretty much be guaranteed to die from alcohol poisoning by the 15th page no matter which genre he's doing, Het or Yuri....

last edited at Apr 1, 2018 8:36PM

Oh shit, they're gonna flood the apartment once they live together

So many fluids... just so many ^^;;