P.402

That's what you call smitten.

Good story, and the plot device seemed to take things well.

So sweet!
Can't wait to see another work from this new author.

Good story, and the plot device seemed to take things well.

I feel like that's an understatement. The plot device was handled so well it was like leaving work at a sewage treatment plant and smelling fresh air for the first time in 10 hours.

This was so mindbogglingly refreshing that I'm considering staying away from the drama tag for awhile.

I am loving the recent age gap posts. The yuriverse needs more age gap yuri couples, like one in this story.

It's cute and I like it, but wow does it skim over parts of the story.

Like on page 412, where she says "Aren't I always saying it?" I'm like "No, this is the first time the story has shown you saying it, and until now I thought only a day or two had gone by". That's some pretty extreme "tell, don't show" going on there.

Plot device seems like a cool dude. I'm sure he'll find somebody nice that likes him back someday.

Cute story. I enjoyed it.

Lovely addition!

A yuri manga with actually a good male character in it is something you don't get to see frequently, though I feel as if his situation ended up a little unresolved. Ultimately, pretty great. Hoping to see more yuri works from the author in the near future.

(I haven't finished it yet, but i have to comment this)
-What's the difference between "Cafe latte" and "Cafe au lait"?
-"Cafe Latte" it's a delicious hot drink and Cafe au Lait has a lot of delicious incest and meeting trough a date web sites mangas

(Don't kill me, i HAD to comment this)

Seems a bit unfair to call Nanase a plot device, he's was a fine supporting role both in literal and narrative sense. Cute story.

GTFO Plot device guy

Good Guy Kou o3ob

(I haven't finished it yet, but i have to comment this)
-What's the difference between "Cafe latte" and "Cafe au lait"?
-"Cafe Latte" it's a delicious hot drink and Cafe au Lait has a lot of delicious incest and meeting trough a date web sites mangas

(Don't kill me, i HAD to comment this)

Mochi au Lait tho

It's cute and I like it, but wow does it skim over parts of the story.

Like on page 412, where she says "Aren't I always saying it?" I'm like "No, this is the first time the story has shown you saying it, and until now I thought only a day or two had gone by". That's some pretty extreme "tell, don't show" going on there.

Agree here. It really did seem that the interactions rushed by fairly quickly, even for a one shot. But I still found this quite cute regardless. What I really would've liked to see would be Hana's first reaction to Shiori being a klutz and breaking her perfect image of her.

It's not often you see art that puts so much thought into the way that clothes hang over people and the structure of different fabrics but every time I see it I am extremely here for it. Looking forward to the potential for much more from this author!

It's cute and I like it, but wow does it skim over parts of the story.

Like on page 412, where she says "Aren't I always saying it?" I'm like "No, this is the first time the story has shown you saying it, and until now I thought only a day or two had gone by". That's some pretty extreme "tell, don't show" going on there.

On the very next page it shows flashbacks to the times she has said it, also implying some time has passed.

last edited at Feb 27, 2018 1:14AM

It's cute and I like it, but wow does it skim over parts of the story.

Like on page 412, where she says "Aren't I always saying it?" I'm like "No, this is the first time the story has shown you saying it, and until now I thought only a day or two had gone by". That's some pretty extreme "tell, don't show" going on there.

On the very next page it shows flashbacks to the times she has said it, also implying some time has passed.

Yeah, but it was still very sudden. I imagine the author was likely restricted on pages but it would have been nice if we'd gotten to see them getting closer stretched out a bit.

This was really nice. I kind of thought it was Peg for just a moment. Nice to see a new author, hopefully there's much more from them.

Cute story, loved the design of the cafe manager also the dude was chill af. Only problem was how all the sudden they got close it felt out of no where. Still cute and refreshing

This was really nice. I kind of thought it was Peg for just a moment. Nice to see a new author, hopefully there's much more from them.

Yeah, I was definitely getting a Kindred Spirits feel from this.

Yikes I kinda feel bad for the guy, being rejected, especially if the one you love is gonna date a family member, must really be heartbreaking

"Relax. I'm just a plot device."

Lmao, the credit page tho. Nonetheless, really cute story.

Yikes I kinda feel bad for the guy, being rejected, especially if the one you love is gonna date a family member, must really be heartbreaking

Nah. He gon' be aiight. Het is a sin

He know when to retreat, if not, i will become one with Mochi