Both their feet are aligned on the last panel..did they stop walking or something?Hmmmm

noticed that too. honestly the last panel makes up for the rest of it for me.

Well, I don't like either of these people.

You are not expected to.

this was sooooooo good i love it when relationships are treated as messy and weird and like real life fuck shit for once

Fix'd it for ya...

Don’t like the cheating, but this is how it goes sometimes, and i felt something changed in the end.. I don’t know why, but i felt like something did lol, but overall i loved this thing to heck xD

Wow I actually love this story. Well-drawn (the hot scenes too) and well-written. Good work.
Others have pointed what I like about this story, so nothing else I can add.

Seeing cheating with two girls actually being in relationship with other girls is kinda refreshing.

10/10 and no regrets

woaa the art was really nice... know what i mean :D

I liked it. Not in the same way that I like, say, Kase-san, but I liked it.

In a neutral perspective, this was actually well done for a one shot.
But yes, the topic is less than satisfactory for most.

... No, didn't like, art was ok but F you betches

Hah, that was great. The ambiguity at the end was perfect. They're both bad people but idc I loved this.

Wait! Wait! Wait! The very last panel! I realized they just STOP walking! Seriously!... Are they! Going to continue!? Faaacckk!!!

Azusa is just a piece of shit who likes to cheat on their significant other. Midori probably isn't the only person she's cheated with. Midori is still a piece of shit, but has some regaining qualities because she actually feels guilty about what she's doing even though she can't stop doing it. All in all, 2 terrible people who are meant for each other. The thing is though if Midori somehow did get Azusa to date her, Azusa would cheat on her as well.

Right choice!

What happened here is a fluffy mangaka was bitten by a wild Kodama lizard (kodama naoko) and the venom affected her storyboarding hand.

I like as expected, if only NTR was like that and ''My unrequited love'' too.
This artist also made a adult Vivio x Nanoha dj and was masterpiece.

i love the artstyle , i hope i get to see more of this

characters who are bad people ≠ characters who are poorly written

Art is good, plot is crap.

Well, I don't like either of these people.

You are not expected to.

Someone is butthurt

What happened here is a fluffy mangaka was bitten by a wild Kodama lizard (kodama naoko) and the venom affected her storyboarding hand.

LMAO!

The last panel saved it IMO. They both stopped walking away because they actually need each other and the mere thought of never seeing the other ever again made their body stop.

"Are you seeing someone?" "Yeah" "Me too" : time for sex!

I have a hunch that if one of them was single, it wouldn't have been the same.

It's a twisted relationship, I'll give you that, but who are we to judge? These two women have an unbreakable bond.

Not the kind of relationship I'd seek, but to each their own.

I like as expected, if only NTR was like that and ''My unrequited love'' too.
This artist also made a adult Vivio x Nanoha dj and was masterpiece.

Love that too. The author drawings is pretty good too mostly nsfw work.

Nya-chan posted:

It's a twisted relationship, I'll give you that, but who are we to judge? These two women have an unbreakable bond.

It's pretty easy to judge them for having no self control and cheating on their girl friends. Something that most people agree is an extremely shitty thing to do.

These are absolutely horrible people. Nevertheless, the story feels real